Reviews for Dancing Through Sunday
NarutoAnDHinata4EvEr chapter 6 . 11/28/2009
Still a great story and at least them being rivals gives Tenten a nice role instead of the BFF :D
NarutoAnDHinata4EvEr chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
Loving the story :D
imatwilightfan chapter 6 . 6/26/2009
the story's sorta vague right now i hope you would fill us in on that soon..the story is interesting enough to make me want to know what happens next..i especially want to know how naruto and hinata end up together here..so please update soon.._
milady.otaku chapter 6 . 3/24/2009
Ahaha, this chapter was cute, too :D Hina's cute in general. TOO BAD SHE'S STILL UNDER THOSE DAMN ROCKS! I swear, she's under there tapping her fingers, saying, "Dammit, Naru. i only did this cuz I thought you'd save me." Ahaha, naw, Hina wouldn't do that XD Lol, well, i can't wait till the next one :D
milady.otaku chapter 5 . 3/24/2009
Rah, sorry I haven't commented in forever. I've been grounded, and lack access to a computer...again. Right right, well this one was super cute. Ahaha, I liek the title "Sasuke the piano guy." lol, sounds like he can make his own sitcom XD Right right, well, onto the next chapter :D
Mintacia chapter 6 . 3/23/2009
Great story so far! :D

I love how Hinata and Naruto interact. So wonderful and fluffy! ;3

The history is very interesting- the thing at the mall they got in trouble for. Can't wait to hear more!

I also wanna find out about Tenten. :O

Very entertaining story. I like it, oh most definitely!

(can't wait for more!)
lil.ramen.lover chapter 6 . 3/23/2009
Ah! I wonder who her new partner will be...Sasuke? or Gaara?
Rose Tiger chapter 6 . 3/23/2009
I hope there will be more naruhina romance soon.
xxxturkey chapter 5 . 3/20/2009
Holy crap, i just realised that not only haven't i reviewed the last chapter in this fic, i haven't reviewed this fic at all... bad lazy student!

Love the way you portrayed Hanabi in chapter 3. Pretty much what i imagine her to be to be honest. Independant, slightly aloof but not quite bitchy. Since i'm being lazy, i could probably define it as being Hyuugaish. Opposite of Hinata and the cute way she quitted in chapter 1.

The fluffy NaruHina cooking was awesome too. But i really thought the back steps idea was genius. Clunky flashbacks squeezed into a story are kinda annoying, but these feel more natural somehow. Maybe cos there's a whole chapter devoted to them, you don't feel like you've been dislocated from the story. Or something...

Actually, now that i've realised it, i kinda feel bad for not reviewing every chapter. Hope you can forgive me...

Guess i should go read chapter 440 now then. I've heard...things... Later.

Josh.
v son sayian chapter 5 . 3/19/2009
I really like both of them, it helps make sense of their world and the present. Are you planning to do a lot of now or some now and later? When the present comes back around will hinata do more competitions?
CosmosAngel1 chapter 5 . 3/9/2009
It most certainly did good. It explained about the 'fans' that Hinata was going on about. So, Naruto has a band? That seems to be done often. I have no doubts that you will figure out a way that will not be cliche and instead be original. I am quite curious as to what the name of the band is.

Also, very nice touch with Sasuke as a 'piano man'. I can see him doing something like that. Of course, I would also like to sedate my curiosity as to how Sakura interacts with Sasuke. Apart from that, I am anxiously awaiting the arrival of new chapters, though I understand a lapse in time. Much luck!
CosmosAngel1 chapter 4 . 3/9/2009
This was an interesting look back at how Hinata's fixation with dancing began. It helped explain and sort out the confusion from the first chapter. You've placed her beginning fixation at the end of her eight grade and she's presently twenty. That is a very well thought out plan you have going. Of course, I can only guess at some things that may have happened during those 4-6 years. I wanna say that Neji must have gotten hurt in the accident and he feels it is because of him that she is not advancing.

Clever titles, by the way. I do like them.
CosmosAngel1 chapter 3 . 3/9/2009
Some of Hinata's character felt a little bit off in this chapter during her conversation with Hanabi. It was probably just me, though, so disregard that comment.

I adored the moments with Hinata and Naruto. I'm glad you did put your own touch on the much-used bathroom scene. It was a little odd to see it there because it's so used, but you made it work. The scene in the kitchen was classic, though. That, cliche as it is, was definitely the highlight of the chapter for me.

Hanabi and Naruto...will be an interesting equation. I eagerly await to read what happens next with that.
CosmosAngel1 chapter 2 . 3/9/2009
I rather liked this chapter. It gives a little more insight into the characters while they are at home. Not to mention, it has added a little mystery at the end. Neji in a wheelchair...a mysterious accident. Cleary you are taking a little spin in the story.

The interaction between Naruto and Sasuke was very cute and was done well. Their friendship is sustained as it was in the manga. I am looking forward to the coming chapters of this. The mystery of Neji is just too good to not discover the answer to.
CosmosAngel1 chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
First off, thank you for going through with another story to supplement Mall Romance.

The beginning of the chapter was a bit hard to follow; then again, trying to explain something like dance competitions is rather difficult and I admire your effort. On another note,it took a bit of time to figure out that Hinata was a dancer. Perhaps that is because you are setting up the story to explain that.

Regardless, you captured the characters well - there was a slight struggle to keep them in line, but again, that is probably because it took a while to get back in the swing of things. All in all, a good beginning.

P.S.

It took me a while to find this. While the current summary is interesting, the story might gather more attention if the summary tells that it is a continuation of Mall Romance. From the current summary, I could not tell.
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