|Reviews for That Slimy Suitor|
| me chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
this is great! fluffy and angsty with good quality. i can imagine their relationship like that if they are going to hook up. i noticed a few grammar mistakes but your style of story-telling is good somewhat covering that.
| Pinkstriped-flamingo chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
why haven't I reviewed this before? So adorable! Running in the line of the same theme with 'Yellow Wedge', you made this so fairytale-like and so sweet without sacrificing the characters, especially Dorothy. I can still see her as our own dorothy.
Cookies. How sweet!
| sassy girl chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
kinda reminds me of MG. cute! this deserves mroe reviews!
| Terra chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
How sweet! :sighs dreamily: By the way, in this sentence: "I just stared at her like stupid" - I think you meant "at her stupidly"? I love that Quatre can't tell what cookie is what and isn't afraid to tease her. Brava!