Reviews for It's the Water's Fault!
AzucenaXshadows chapter 1 . 1/1
roflmao XD I CAN'T!
that was hilarious!
I can't wait to read the next one.
thanks for sharing
kitsunelullaby chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
i'll be sure to read the sequel
jj chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
cute
markie chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
hot and sexy i love it
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Oh yes Sasuke!... Commence round 2! Hehehehe!
g1rldraco7 chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
That was hot and funny. Wet does increase the urges...anyway great job :)
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Heh heh, this is nice, I don't see why ANYONE would flame it!W
narutogirl4893 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
This story is awesome. i love the guy on guy job at makin sakura look nieve and stupid. lol. i like the way you write, it as very interesting
Hitomi-taichou chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
We get to read round 2, yes?
Itanaru101 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
LOVE DIS SO DAM MUCH! SO FUCKIN' HOT!
whitewolfhikari chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
it is pretty funny.
Aithwen chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Adri this is fucking halarious and i fucking loved it

never minde what other people say just have fun with it.

Oh and also you might wanna fix up the spacing...it's kinda hard to read...also lilian likes the story too ;) keep up the great work. XP
PrincessAmioKi chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
For your first yaoi, I thought this was pretty good. You did really good on the setting, sex appeal and tension. So keep writing and read other yaoi fanfics for tips, I know your work in the yaoi area will get better in no time. Hey, it is already good so your starting at a really place to begin with. Good luck and best wishes on your future pieces!
thepresentgift18 chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
i really enjoyed this story! and no there weren't any spelling errors to my eyes. (lol) keep up the good work!
Indie-Surfer Takeru chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
"I just gave him an Uchiha glare and he just gave me a dope glare" hahaha... nice.

there were some mistakes but it was pretty good. yeah just remember to not make everything sound like its going so fast.

Takeru
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