Reviews for Black Comet
LoveForever14 chapter 4 . 2/12/2009
love it! update soon
vampirebitme08 chapter 4 . 2/12/2009
i would love to be alone with jasper!loved the chapter
lily1121 chapter 4 . 2/12/2009
that was cute jasper being occ. please update soon
Tempting Tangle chapter 4 . 2/12/2009
Aw poor Bella is terrified of him lol

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Ginny's Biggest Fan chapter 3 . 2/12/2009
Hiya! I just stumbled upon your story, and it's really good so far. I really like the pairing of Jasper and Bella and I'm always happy when I can find another story. Just one little, tiny thing. When you said 'self phone' I believe you ment 'cell phone'. Other than that, excellent job!
Tempting Tangle chapter 3 . 2/12/2009
Oh did Alice see this hmm

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nia-ox chapter 3 . 2/12/2009
Wow, it was great!

But I think you meant cell phone :) Easy mistake to make!
lily1121 chapter 3 . 2/12/2009
oh come on please update soon. thias story rocks!
BaconButt chapter 3 . 2/12/2009
Hope you update soon!
vampirebitme08 chapter 2 . 2/10/2009
i like it so far. so many possibilities.
Tempting Tangle chapter 2 . 2/10/2009
I can just tell this is gonna be hella awesome

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nia-ox chapter 2 . 2/10/2009
Absolutely great - I get the feeling that that song was played by Jasper, right? :)
LoveForever14 chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
hahah i love this! update soon
BaconButt chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Great start!

Can't wait to read more.
iim asia chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Excellent start. Can't wait to see more
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