There has been so many fics with a tissue warning that was never needed, but boy were you right on this one though. That was fantastic and very belivable, it was so easy to picture in your head. WELL DONE!

I'm just too darn lazy to log in at the moment m'dear ... but I just wanted to say ... LOVED THIS! I'm not a big talyn john fan, quite frankly i hate the whole two john thing ... but oh well ... this was good, loved it, heck, i love anything you write, especially the underwear one ... but anyhoo ... loved this!

Marmite here. Just read this and I really enjoyed it. As I was getting more upset, and this sounds dead cheesy, I started hearing the beatles' song 'Golden Slumbers' in my head. Goes like this:

"Once there was a way to get back homeward, once there was a way to get back home, sleep pretty darling do not cry, and I will sing a lullaby."

"Golden slumbers fill your eyes, smiles awake you when you rise, sleep pretty darling do not cry, and I will sing a lullaby." (then repeat first section). Oh dear, I'm upset now. But thanks anyway.

Awww thats beautiful! Lets have more like that!

Eve :-)

Minh that was beautiful!

Once again I am sat in front of the computer crying my eyes out! And as usual all my power over the English language has deserted me! Suffice it to say that that was BEAUTIFUL!

-checking my dictionary of superlatives-

Minh, you are now officially the queen of shippy FS angst! I bow before you, and implore you to continue! With what lies in store for Aeryn and the other John, I reckon there's a bundle of new material just waiting around the corner. I, for one, cannot wait!

That was beautiful. Exquisite. Thank you.

Cry, no. Sigh, yes. Well-done and very touching. When you have lost someone close, you never want to let go, but life has a way of making you move on. Enjoyed it a lot.

This I adored! Thank you so much, now I can go to sleep with a happy little smile on my face. And no, I did not cry. Thanks a million, Ali D :~)

It was sad but i don't blame you. It was really well written. Thanx!

That was absolutely amazing, which is all I can say really! I'm speechless! It was soo sad and just how I would have imagined the two of them to be! I think you should congratulate your muse!