Reviews for Existence
his golden perfection chapter 9 . 1/16/2010
i still think you're name's pretty COOL. :)

idk how long this review's going to be- just warning you.

do you like long reviews?

well anyways...

this was really good!

the chapters are a bit short but that's ok,

because they were all fairly well written. and enjoyable too read.

i can't believe they were away from each other for TWENTY SEVEN YEARS.

that's like a lifetime. seriously.

that must be so sad to be apart from each other so longg.

happy endings are my favorite thing ever.

and u made this story have a happy ending- thnaks a dozen for that.

so that just made your story better than it is already.


sissy chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
you gave her two of the lamest powers ever
Jazz Left chapter 10 . 6/28/2009
HAHAHA! You make me laugh!(in a good way!) I love this story. kind of short but it was cute!

Jazmin Torres _
SillyBella 11 chapter 9 . 6/5/2009
not crap loved it your opinion you just think that because your the author i LOVED it
SillyBella 11 chapter 8 . 6/5/2009
longer chapters would be nice
SillyBella 11 chapter 3 . 6/5/2009
hint hint if you ask nicely then maybe more people will review love story keep writing
kirra993 chapter 11 . 6/5/2009
I liked the idea of the story but it went to fast.

anytways keep writing. :)
Reader113 chapter 4 . 6/5/2009
I totally agree thet Rob could never be a good Edward.
zeelia chapter 3 . 6/5/2009
ok, so first of all, I can't take it anymore. your writing stinks and the storyline is BORING. I know im a bad person and everything, but im being honest. the story goes way to fast! normally. Bella should be dead, and all of the sudden the cullens see her and their like ''o hi, what up?''

don't yu find that a bit weird?

and try to be more subtle, less bubbly (twilight is NOT a bubbly story) and put more explanation about what Bella did during all those years.

im sure you got some inspiration, so go ahead!
FRK921 chapter 9 . 5/25/2009
FRK921 chapter 6 . 5/25/2009
wow...Edward's in like...this box?

And he can't get out...even to feed?

FRK921 chapter 5 . 5/25/2009
how sad...Edward...
FRK921 chapter 4 . 5/25/2009
I didn't really like most of the cast for the movie.

'Emmett' would have been great if his hair was curly, and 'Alice' was supposed to be short!

I didn't really like the 'Bella' or 'Edward'...bur I did like 'Esme' and 'Carlisle'...along with 'Charlie' and 'Billy'
FRK921 chapter 3 . 5/25/2009
...what about Edward?
FRK921 chapter 2 . 5/25/2009
interesting school...
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