Reviews for A Lover's Conflict
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2015
Hey its beautiful 333
maldiciones chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
this is simply perfect.
deactivated.account.2015 chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Silencio was amazing and so is this
luckintheair04 chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Beautiful. I love it.
alex.jh.14 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Amazing, you captured the essence of the story.
LeelanSpeaks chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
"and the line between love and hate was finally blurred"

i love this. imma copy this in my notebook(with your name as the author, of course) just so i can read it everytime i feel like crying.
Meetings in broom cupboards chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
beautiful
LE trex chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Aw. Fits the story well . . .
CB chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Wow i really liked it. Good job! :)
Lies-Taste-Sweeter-Than-Truth chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
AH I LOVE THIS :)

It flows so well! I read it aloud because I think you get a better *feel* for the rhythm that way... So good. Unbelievable relevant rhymes. So good.

LiesTasteSweeterX
icyclouds chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
wow, that is an amazing poem. I love it.
Cute but kinda deadly chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
I didn't feel like signing in :P

Oh my God that wad awesome! I made a dramione poem,but not as good as this :)
StaraLaura chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
This was one of the most amazing poems that I've ever heard of! It leaves the reader with a mysteious feeling and cliffhanger on it, even if it is a poem. Pretty cool if you ask me. Now, on to the grammer. I saw a few mistakes like:

"Fists in her hair, he pride had been scraped"

That was about it and I'm positive that you meant to say "her", but whatever, right? And the ryhming was excellent, something that just an ordinary person couldn't do. You have a great imagination and I can't wait to see what other fics/poems you have for this site who has a huge load of crap in the stories. You made me proud to be a Harry Potter fan! And you absolutley, positivley, must write more stories. I'm dying for your next idea!

-sxmfan :3