Reviews for The Loss of Innocence
Soul's Anima chapter 4 . 9/30/2010
Is it over? Hope not...
icaughtkira chapter 4 . 4/27/2010
I adore this. It's well written, and these two are my favorites. I hope you update. :)
Skye Evans chapter 4 . 11/21/2009
I like this story. A lot.

Please continue it! I want to see where you plan on taking it.
Elphabella1122 chapter 3 . 4/7/2009
I likey! Puleeze continue. For some reason...I'm starting to like Victoria...Sorta.
timetravellingvampirewithawand chapter 3 . 3/29/2009
loved the new chap

:)
scorchedtrees chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
I liked this a lot! It was a nice insight into (human) Riley's mind, and... yeah, I just liked it. I love your characterizations of everybody! Great job. :D
scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
I like it so far! Written well enough, interesting, and certainly original - I don't think I've ever seen Victoria going to high school to find Riley and Bree before. xD

Just one problem - maybe it's only my computer, but the first part of the story - from the beginning to about "head barely acknowledging him. It wasn’t hard to guess that he was the best friend of the first boy. It was so cliché, I felt like gagging. The whole crowd seemed to stop talking, just to stare at me. I raised my eyebrow, and he grinned cockily. “You new?” I cast him my most captivating smile", is formatted sort of... awkwardly. It cuts off in random sentences and goes to a new line, and stuff. It's sort of distracting.

Other than that, great job. I like it a lot so far. :D