|Reviews for Unraveling|
| Sadie chapter 28 . 10/3
I love this story! Can't wait to read more, pleeease come back!
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/25
This fic is amazing! I hope you'll update it and have Oliver and Charlie together!
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/21
I don't know how I found this fanfic but it's amazing!
You have to update more chapters. It's a shame that you're leaving it here, just when it's getting so good.
Hope you can gather more inspiration and give us a few more chaps!
| Lena xo chapter 1 . 4/1
I went to try and look for some more OW fan fiction, but your incarnation of him is my favourite version! I think I need a little break from this website before I try again.
| Lena xo chapter 28 . 4/1
Oh my lordie.
This story has all the elements of a great fan fiction. It mentions main canon events but doesn't focus on them. It introduces an OC who is likeable but not perfect. It has the promised ship in it but the events around the ship, from the matches to the high school drama, make it so much more than just a soppy romance and lifts the story to the next level. It features characters who are just names in the canon and gives them life and personalities. It's also absolutely, laugh out loud hilarious. It has all the best parts of day-to-day life of Hogwarts and magic. My quest for a decent Oliver x OC fic has reached an end, but so too has the available chapters for me to read! Please please please pretty please update soon.
In one of your earlier chapters you were concerned they went from enemies to frenemies too fast. I actually think it was perfect - they were forced together in isolation from the others by circumstance, so the change in their relationship and the pace at which it took place made sense. As a reader it's also pretty boring to read endless chapters about two people loathing each other, like we tend to get the image pretty quickly, and we are here to see the relationship develop, which it did. Charlie's insertion into canon events was also well-suited, especially in regards to Quidditch games (e.g., her being ridiculously sick during the match was a great alternative to Harry's dementor attack). I'm also glad she isn't personal best mates with the golden trio, but that they do have a cameo (well, 2/3 do anyway). Anyway, thank you so much for your work so far. I look forward to reading more (although it would also be great if you could finish the story during my lifetime ;) )
| neffa chapter 21 . 3/5
"our palms were sweatier than a priest in a sauna" i lost it omg
| Guest chapter 28 . 2/25
Waiting for a new chapter. Don't leave it hanging!
| dogsrock101 chapter 28 . 12/11/2016
Hello! I read all 28 chapters today when I should've been studying for finals instead, but what can I say, this story is addicting! I like your OC's sass. Hope this fic isn't abandoned - seeing how you've been working on it for 7 years, it'd be a shame to stop now! Dont leave us wondering who this mystery guy is! :)
| Khailey Egen chapter 28 . 10/20/2016
Srsly can we have oliver and charlie together already? this is very frustating
| Alexis chapter 28 . 4/13/2016
OMFG, this story is friggin awesome UPDATE!
| Saphira113 chapter 28 . 3/29/2016
Is this surprise guest another brother? Or Charlie's childhood best friend? He seems like a fun person to know.
I hope the party continues to go well. And none of the team lets slip anything that would break the Statute of Secrecy.
| circumvolation chapter 28 . 3/24/2016
hey, I just read the story and I love it. It's actually quite amazing that you are writing it all this time.
| taylorblaze1 chapter 28 . 3/12/2016
Please update! This is so good!
| xbonesofdiamondsx chapter 28 . 3/9/2016
Keeps getting better and better. Update soon ) )
| Guest chapter 28 . 2/22/2016
Thr best Oliver/OC story so far in fanfiction