|Reviews for Granola Bars and Fancy Cigars|
| Forgotmypassword chapter 7 . 7/20/2013
Story has been great so far, the only things I have to mention are the German translations.
'Ich bin traurig' can mean 'I'm sorry', but it's more along the lines of 'I am sad' and the more common phrase for I'm sorry that Kurt would use is 'Es tut mir Leid' which translates to literally as 'it does me pity' but is the phrase they use in Germany.
Also, 'Gehen Sie Weg'
is correct, but it's using the polite form of you, but you'd say it if you were talking to someone you didn't know well. As Kurt was talking to Logan (a VERY close friend xD) he'd use the informal which would just be 'Geh Weg!'. Plus, Kurt was upset so you'd understand him being a little brusque to Logan, as the informal imperative (command words like 'go away!') can seem harsh.
Also, try to be consistent with Kurt's speech. Sometimes you put in the v for w like someone with a German accent would do, but sometimes you don't. It's hard to translate accented speech into writing, so don't worry too much about it xD
I'm not fluent in German as I'm still learning it, but I hope this helps improve your accuracy. Otherwise it's good :)
| xXTheBlackFoxXx chapter 3 . 7/9/2013
So far I really like this story and this is how I would see kurt if he just got to the school,all jumpy and stuff and is cute so far
| Sage-the-Anthro-Tiger chapter 9 . 7/3/2013
I was kinda on the defend with Logurt but now because of thus story, I'm am instant fan and am happily shipping it! And also I love this story with the fluff, funny moments and drama! Very good!
| i14142000 chapter 9 . 12/10/2012
Beautiful story i enjoyed it very much.
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/10/2012
what does that word kurt keeps calling logan
| darrylover16 chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
This is a very good story that i like alot.
| BunnyButton chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I have officially fallen in love with Logurt because of you! Thank you so much! I have liked the x-men for years, I grew up on the cartoons, but I never thought of that pairing and I LOVE it! They are so cute together!
| rockhorsegeek chapter 9 . 5/26/2012
awwww, I loved that fic! I don't care that there's the odd mistake in the fic, or the odd thing off with the horse thing (with my username, you'd expect that I'd guess xD), this was a great fic! _ I'm not much of a Kurt/Logan fan, but this fic has definately changed my mind! :D
| Hafter chapter 2 . 11/4/2011
Häagen-Dazs is a brand of ice cream, established by Jewish-Polish immigrants Reuben and Rose Mattus in the Bronx, New York, in 1961The name Häagen-Dazs does not derive from any of the North Germanic languages; it is simply two made-up words meant to look Scandinavian to American eyes (despite the fact that the digraphs "äa" and "zs" are not part of any native words in any of the Scandinavian languages). This practice is known in the marketing industry as foreign branding. Mattus thought that Denmark was known for its dairy products and had a positive image in the U.S. He included an outline map of Denmark on early labels, as well as the name of Copenhagen.
| Emerald Ryuu Feather chapter 4 . 7/13/2011
oh, kinky... i liked this chap! Thank you for geting that into the story! *hugs*
| Emerald Ryuu Feather chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
I liked it!
| Randomizer7 chapter 9 . 6/30/2011
This was one of the longest and best stories ive ever read! I liked how you followed the movies with your story. Very nice!
| YOUR MOM chapter 7 . 6/19/2011
Aww this story is so cute!
i love the pairing
and i have to say, it's cute but sometimes very funny to read/see the trys of nongerman writing or speaking german :D
just like you probably think about my way writing this review.
sorry for my english XD
um yeah i wanted to say: I'm sorry. is: Es tut mir leid. :)
Ich bin traurig would mean: i'm sad ;)
still loving it that kurt's german XD only thing i like about beeing german
| Tyler Berry chapter 9 . 4/7/2011
I LOVED it!:D it was good very sweet and funny! cant wait to read more of your work later on!XD
| Tyler Berry chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Its was great reading this! :)