|Reviews for Vanquished|
| Xxsilver-dragonnessxX chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
17’s character was portrayed really well! I absolutely love the one-shot!
| brenthforever chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
deep man, real deep.
| gigity gigity goo chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
This was really good. I would'nt have ever thought of writing this story and I've never seen anything quite like it. This was good though.
I think you captured #17 really well, "Even when I lose. I win" haha - classic 17.
| Blume chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
interesting, I never saw it that way... biter, but true. it's a shame this fic doesn't have as many reviews as it should but... oh well...
what will become of M. Trunks now? anre more importantly (considering the times we are living) will there ever be a Trunks in the Dragonball: Evolution universe? I'm still not sure if I want to know...
| Vimesy chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
I love your character portrayal. Very believable. Its rough around the edges; I doubt you've got the time or energy to polish it, though, so no worries.
| Obelisk of Light chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
The last thing Future Seventeen wonders about is Trunks's name, of all things. This was a good take on the Mirai timeline.
Excellent Seventeen characterisation, by the way. You've used the first person POV very well.
| swirlpop chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
I particularly enjoyed 17's voice here! And because you asked for constructive criticism: watch out for your verb tenses (they were a bit chronologically iffy around the middle). It's ok - first person present tense can be tricky to write in. X( I know I sure as hell messes up with in the past had to writeded wrong.
Oh god, this line: "He would try so hard, pouring his sorrow and hatred into every battle we fought." I literally made a ":[" face. 17's amused, childish tone juxtaposed the seriousness of Trunks' emotions very well.
Fantastic job, I say! :3