I always liked Stefan and Samuel the most out of the 3 but great job on this

Oooooooh my god I love it. Wonderful. Fantastic. I'm in love 3

Beautifully written! Loved it until the very end, talking about "irony". Guess I never found the competition between the three men "ironic".

Had to love this because its been my thought since book one. :)

LOVE THIS!

aww i always liked mercy/stefan would be cool

Very nice one-shot. Loved seeing Stephan's POV about Mercy.

Love it

awww cute story, I do wish patricia briggs would have added some more POV

That was most excelent!

You know, that's something that always bugged me about the Mercy series. She has so many guys after her and she doesn't seem to realize what they give up for her. Ungrateful woman. *sigh* I'd give anything for a Samuel, Adam or Stefan of my own. :P

Nicely written. I really loved it.

But poor Stefan. :( Can you write a Stefan Mercy story please? I'm more of a Adam Mercy fan, but my second and close second is Stefan and Mercy. And there's like none on here! *sighs in annoyance* Anyway, kudos!

I just wanted to say that your two stories here are the best I've found in the Mercy Thompson category. They're good writing, and even better when compared with the rest

I loved Stefan's point of view. Very realistic.

Okay, here we go. First off, I really enjoyed your fic, the subject made it easy to imagine that is had happened in the actual book, and the characterizations were spot-on. Parts of it simple gave me shivers and I love the emotions you captured in the content. There were little to no grammar, usage, or mechanics errors so far as I could tell (I'm quite tired right now, might have missed some, but they weren't glaringly obvious if they were there). If I'm going to give any critisism, it would be the simple sentence structure, mostly on the dialogue, and little use of dialogue indicators such as "said" and all its variants. Also, the dialogue Adam has at the beginning as he is asking Stefan questions seemed forced and could use a little rephrasing. I adore your irony (haha). Keep writing!

very ironic

i like it!