Reviews for The Ground Up
Read-Sleep-Routine chapter 14 . 3/8/2014
Hiruma lover chapter 14 . 2/1/2010
aw great story can't wait fer the next chapter! :~)
nolongerhereok chapter 12 . 7/8/2009
He farted, not even tempted to smile as he usually might have – laser focused.

Kahahaha, that made me laugh.
Lazaros chapter 14 . 6/28/2009
Very interesting. please update soon and possibly longer chapters would be really nice :)
Bar-Ohki chapter 14 . 4/29/2009
MisikaChan chapter 14 . 4/25/2009
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG! WHAT THE HELL? my eyes are going to pop out O_O honestly i NEED to know more X'(
Raernix chapter 14 . 4/24/2009
oh my god... I was not expecting that...

im so drawn in to this story
Raernix chapter 13 . 4/2/2009
well thought out.. im gld i could catch up
Bar-Ohki chapter 13 . 3/20/2009
You sent the Huh-brothers to war! Gah!

And no word on Hiruma watching it (though he logically must be).

Oh well, very amusing.
Bar-Ohki chapter 12 . 3/11/2009
That's just awesome! I love how we go through what Sena feels as the match starts.
Bar-Ohki chapter 11 . 3/4/2009
Nothing like the Coach to clear thoughts so that the game can come in focus. Go Sena!
Bar-Ohki chapter 10 . 2/28/2009
Tuli-Susi chapter 9 . 2/24/2009
Lol. Retired sports pros usually find themselves as news reporters or aports announcers. They're the best ones to explain what the athletes might be going through, and how the rules work. It's a great gig cos everyone is sure that they DO know what they're talking about, and they can continue to be associated with what they loved and dedicated their life to.

...I actually can imagine Watt as an announcer. His spoken language is better than his written.
Bar-Ohki chapter 9 . 2/20/2009
That's just awesome!
Bar-Ohki chapter 8 . 2/19/2009
*laughs* Cute!
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