|Reviews for Watching Thunderstorms|
| pandorad24 chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
"Not strong enough to be alpha male" my foot! Grrrr, Iggy is just as strong as Fang! FANG SUX!
| peachiPIE'Bellagail'Bowawa chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
im sorry to tell you, 11 year olds dont talk like that current day. :P
well, atleast i dont, and im pretty sure all the other 11 year olds i know dont.. :3
| TheAngel'sWings chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Wow. It really does make you wonder what Jeb's motivation was during those 2 years. Interesting way of making Jeb try and train himself to not say Experiment, it does make him more suspicious of him, particularly since you would think he would have the opposite problem: Trying to remember to call them experiments to the other whitecoats.
I like your ideas for expanding more minor characters, they're great.
| Person95 chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Wow, I like this. It's another way of looking at Jeb when Max was 10. I like it! Please update!