|Reviews for The Pariah, Heroic|
| raptoregg64 chapter 16 . 10/17/2010
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*is speechless with the awesomeness of the fic and its ending*
| rawrrkitty chapter 16 . 10/1/2010
:O Wow. It's...over. I'm so happy (about the ending) yet at the same time, I'm sad. This piece of brilliance is done. I'm pretty sure I'll be back to reread it sometime. ;)
A sequel? That would be nice - though I'm satisfied with this ending. I definitely am looking forward to what you come up with next. ;D
Poor Electra, though. D: I understand Mungojerrie's reasoning about the whole "Dun wanna be leader!" but naww...
(I still love Mungo/Teazer.)
AMAZING STUFF, MY LOVE, MY SHRAPPIE, MY WRITERSLAVE. I love you and this forevahh~
| Voice Number Seven chapter 16 . 10/1/2010
wooooooow... i'm glad i stuck with it at first, i was wondering why you were continuing after they left the junkyard, but I like the way you ended that. it was VERY well-done. and i like the idea of a mungoxlectra pairing...
| Shadows.in.the.moon chapter 16 . 10/1/2010
lol brilliant ending though i still think Mungo and Electra belong together! brilliant i would love a sequel to, like to see mungo get his moment of glory, for all the Jellicles to see him be heroic :D
| Roselna bein' lazy chapter 16 . 10/1/2010
Aww! I kinda wish we coulda seen them go back for the ball, but this was good! I loved the mother/son moment...feel bad that they'll never realize. Well, great story. Can't wait tuh see what you have next time around.
| rawrrkitty chapter 15 . 9/25/2010
Damn, damn, damn. That was INCREDIBLE, I swear. And this has turned out to be one of the most amazing stories I've ever read - fanfiction or actual book. I promise you that, my Shrappie. I'm proud to have you as my baby kitten. ;D
Jerrie's past, finally. It made me sniffle happily - "Ma, ma." Way too cute, okay? But ahh, I loved it.
The fight just captured me - I couldn't stop reading. And the bit with Macavity, where Jerrie's about to die? Again with the HOLY WHAT? D: But the ending was perfect. Just perfect.
Your Ra-ra will always be here to squee over your writing, kay? :D Which reminds me, YAYAYAY I got a mention, heehee. :D I might explode, but I just promised that I'd always be here, so... mhm.
Love. Just love.
| Roselna chapter 15 . 9/25/2010
AHHHHS! I LOVE IT! I must admit, I laughed a little bit *more like all out* maniacally when Misto disarmed all those guns...I have a tendency to do that...but now...what about Leccy?
| Voice Number Seven chapter 15 . 9/25/2010
it's absolutely adorable! I don't know if i'm overusing that word, but I wouldn't know what else to call it. And i don't know if I've said this before (prolly not cuz I'm an airhead) but I really like the way you write the cats, especially Mungojerrie. you make them seem so human, and it's amazing what you've done with them. i can't wait for that last chapter even if I'm sad to see it be gone...
| SnapKitty chapter 15 . 9/25/2010
... nmehhhhehe NYAWWWW The end of the chapter is so cute! Oh I sound like an inarticulate fangirl... Jerrie's backstory is incredibly sweet and sad
| SnapKitty chapter 14 . 9/19/2010
Absolutely love the argument between Tugger and Misto! Of course, the entire chapter is a brilliant piece of writing, but that bit made me chuckle ;)
| rawrrkitty chapter 14 . 9/18/2010
GAH, just beautiful. I'm impressed beyond being impressed. I may explode from the pressure of being so impressed. I probably WILL explode from the pressure of expressing my impressedness to you right now and in the coming chapters.
Anyway. No wait. A'yway (no worries, it's an inside joke) that was wonderful. I adored the bits at the beginning - Munkustrap, Macavity, Electra, Rumpleteazer (loving the originality there 8D) and of course, poor old Mungojerrie. Oh, am I happy.
And all this leading up to the final two chapters...oh wow. I'm just excited.
Did I mention? Loving this line right here:
"Could you go through one single conversation without mentioning your mane?"
| Voice Number Seven chapter 14 . 9/18/2010
you never cease to amaze me, m'dear. wonderfully written-especially the beginning. I like the histories, they you wrote them with the "and that's how name's life being" or along those lines. It had a very nice rhythm to it.
| Shadows.in.the.moon chapter 13 . 9/16/2010
loving it really, that was so cute how he made a new necklace for her :D so romantic, grrr evil Macavity! hate him beyond hate right now. evil D: hate him so much. so yea, go mungo ur protecting the Jellicles! yay Mungo! whoop whoop. plz update soon! :D
| raptoregg64 chapter 13 . 9/13/2010
*wails* YOU NEARLY MADE ME CRY!
The only reason that I didn't was because I was listening to happy music while reading.
*sniffles* Poor Mungo... poor Teazer... poor Lectra... poor everyone except Mac and his allies...
| rawrrkitty chapter 13 . 9/12/2010
Ohhhhhhhh...that last bit got me right here, right at the heart. Ohhhhhhhhh...
There are certain little things that make me cry, see, and that just did it. Damn you, thank you. :)
This is so saddeningly beautiful. The little bits about heroes and dreams were like the perfect touch. Damn. Someone has a lot, and I mean a LOT of talent. LOVE. I now claim you as my writer slave. Coolcool? ;D