|Reviews for The Words You Need Said|
| Jk chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Nice job & God bless
| Bourbon Rose chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Oh my god, sweetness... You've captured Jasper and Esme so well :) Good job.
| Moomins chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
First ever story i've read on here that has my name in it! and spelt correctly :D
| Abrokenheart325 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
That was so sweet! I started crying at the part when he was thinking about how Esme was like his mother and the way he was talking about he mom was soo sweet! Good job! _
| Rey chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
This is a great story- very sweet!
| MorbidEmoBarbie chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
i totally 100% agree that Jasper is a sweet guy. this story was great, BTW.
| two hours' traffic chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
I realise that I always quote your stories when I review them, but I can't come up with another way to give you good feedback.
"A breeze blew though the open window. It ruffled Esme’s hair, and Jasper almost thought he could smell a hint of lavender."
That line made me catch my breath. It was heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time.
| Sachita chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
"She needed to be a mother and he needed a mother to be there. That was enough."
This sentence was beautiful. I think it captured their relationship very well! Esme seems to me everything a mother has to be: caring, compassionate and warm. I liked Edward's support, also.
You did a great job with this. I liked it a lot.
| Caunoiech chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I love love love your characterizations of Jasper. You are the first author who has captured him the way I read him in the books; he's my favorite character, though Carlisle tried very hard to tie. The relationship between Esme and Jasper was sweet; all that lovely angst over him screwing up was sweeter. -evil grin-.
I know you're planning on putting up either an Esme or a Bella next, but if you're so inspired... more Jazz would be great!
| OstentatiousQuerida chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
I really love Esme's character and how she acts like the mother of the Cullen family.
Cool song, I quite like sixpence none the richer, but I hadn't heard that one. I bet it gets stuck in my head.
| breathlessbeauty chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
And they were still in character.