Reviews for Olfaction
Tony7323 chapter 6 . 5/9/2013
I Really Loved It A lot, You Have a Very Dirty & Naughty Mind Very Nicely Done ... And the bottom Part Gave me a Very Good Laugh Great Job... That was Some Fantastic SMUT !
Tony7323 chapter 5 . 5/9/2013
Wow That Was Awesome I really Loved it ... That was 1 of the Better Chapters of Smut I have read Of Bones On this website You Did Great...
legggate chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Very nice, I really liked this one.
cheysma2000 chapter 5 . 4/10/2010
Oh my god. I just found this today and it was awesome.
littlejunebug chapter 3 . 12/1/2009
aww. so sweet :) and a perfect ending, so bonesy (yeah, it's not a word, whatever..) :D great job
MMWillow13 chapter 6 . 8/25/2009
OMG I love it especially the very end lol some security guard is definitely smiling
Viktorija chapter 6 . 8/25/2009
I loved it!Great job!:)
Byjinder chapter 6 . 8/10/2009
Wow for your first sex scene that was pretty hot. You don't need to change a thing. I love this story.
Joy Kennan chapter 5 . 6/24/2009
That was totally hot. And VERY well written - I'm impressed with your vocabulary and your ability to manipulate your verbs and adjectives to create a truly AUTHORED piece of smut. Loved it.
Aching Bones chapter 3 . 6/17/2009
Hi there,

How sweet! How he drove to this place just to surprise her...how he blindfolded her and carried her to his perfect spot...how he had planned it all for her...and she loved it...no one else had ever done anything like this for her...Love how she was affected by every aspect of him...and how, although she was lousy at it, she could read the expression in his eyes when he looked at her lips...She was right about one thing though...this was definitely not something a partner would do for you...Loved it and thank you.

Ger
Aching Bones chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
Hi there,

Again, wonderful...what I find so sad in these first two are one, that he thinks he can never tell her how he feels, can never have her and two, there is always something stopping them from being together...the professional line here...but so glad that they continue to cross it with gusto...

Thank you...

Ger
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Hi there,

Wonderful...I know that one, not being able to get rid of a smell that is pervading...Just love how after so much frustration and eventually anger he sees her scarf...how he puts it to his face and smells and how he sleeps with it wrapped around his mouth and nose...I loved it...

Ger
SillySavannah chapter 6 . 5/21/2009
awesome job! i especially loved the ending. your writing got better and better as the story went along...continue writing!
lilalo264888 chapter 6 . 5/16/2009
Busted ! :p
MeakoXIII chapter 6 . 5/15/2009
i freakin love that story. it's amazing. really.
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