Reviews for Justice, thy name is L
LineOfSightName chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
This was really well written, and in characer too. Depicts their relationship well. Faved. Can't seem to talk in complete sentences.
Kavyle chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Cool short story. . I actually want to kill Raito myself, but I guess that's impossible because he doesn't exist.

You know, I could actually see L doing that. Staring weirdly at Raito while thinking that.
Crimson Cupcake chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Wow...beautifully depicted! I like your use of present tense, and how you don't say 'he' too much, for L. Poor Justice...
merichuel chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
really good, i mean, i can perfectly imagine those thought on L, really really good, and... beautiful, i really feel bad for L, as i feel the same way, to have been the best without any kind of effort, just to meet someone (in my case 4 or 5 people) and realise they are so much better that you that you feel lost

good chapter, keep with the good job!