Reviews for Strange Circumstance
LightRayPearlshipper chapter 2 . 4/16/2013
I just disliked the plot.
Rokudaime Raikage chapter 2 . 10/16/2011
8 out of 10. Please keep updating
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 2 . 10/13/2011
This story is good so far. I'll be keeping an eye out for updates, cause this could be the start of an interesting story!
100-percent-Empoleon chapter 2 . 12/22/2010
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the-ice-cold-alchemist chapter 2 . 3/26/2010
This is great! Update asap
Yewsii chapter 2 . 2/13/2010
W is for Wonderful O is for O Ahh W is for Wonderful. WHATS THAT SPELL? WOW! Oh, one quick question. Whats with the licking? PLEASE! I HAVE TO KNOW side affects of not telling include: bruises, scars, and possible bricks raining from the sky
The Black Gallade chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
omg dude u gotta finish.. i havent been this excited about pokemon since i was ten!
Niki chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
That was a very creative story, but kinda of wished you maded it longer, ir was really fun to read! Keep up the good work
gokerw chapter 2 . 5/24/2009
different,but good,what about the pokemon?
Leon29 The Wolf chapter 2 . 5/12/2009
When the next Chapter ? i kind of liked the story.
FALLING-ANGEL24 chapter 2 . 2/19/2009
whens the next chapter?
Kai Hiwatari Seigaku's Phoenix chapter 2 . 2/14/2009
kyu lucario dawn doesn't no about lucario it's in hoen i think anways may is the one whlo was in the lucario movie nut other than that it was alsome i loved it update soon kyu
Zohaku chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
Nice work. The story was short but sweet.
Azure Butterfly chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
Not bad...

You've really improved! Much longer than before, and the plot makes a bit more sense.

Now, nitpicking for a bit, Pokemon have the same plural and singular form of their name (a single Pikachu, or a group of Pikachu). I'm going by the original anime, as the dub forgets this sometimes.

The shock factor of the transformations are improving, but still need a bit more work to be perfect.

Finally, you could use some humor or some other device to spice the story up a bit. The part with a sign, for example, could have been played for irony. Little things like that will keep the reader interested throughout the whole story.

Keep up the good work!
TJFS chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
the mental convension was allitle too short. but well done!