Reviews for Children of Saturn, Book 1: What Have We Done
Holidai chapter 22 . 1/13/2014
Oh wow, this chapter was fantastic! I am so glad Edward is at peace. I truly hope Aro gets what's coming to him.
Lady Skyelite chapter 22 . 1/13/2014
I did enjoy the analogy - a lot, yes there WAS great tragedy in what has happened to Edward, and the way that Eleazar has been used to destroy his good friends, and force other unwilling vampires and humans to serve a vicious and immoral 'King', but life is NOT a tragedy in every instance! Bella's dream wasn't really a dream, was it? Edward's soul did come to let her know that he was at peace, and to show her that there IS a heaven as Carlisle believes! Peter's words have a much deeper meaning than even he knows, I think, being words that describe how the vampire memory works, but also telling how the mind of a vampire can sequester certain parts of itself to protect the vampire from what he or she has done or had done to them! Just the fact that Bella's blood transmits her shield to others is NOT something that ANYONE outside of their family should have ANY knowledge of - at ALL! Alice and Peter are right about Aro and his love of spectacle, though, and the fact that most vampires ARE pagan! The marriage of the God of War and a Saturno at the biggest pagan festival of the year; the one that grants PROTECTION from all evil, and grants fertility and prosperity one any who choose to marry one that day, will appeal to his love of grand gestures and, in his eyes at least, be seen as a way to atone for the death of one of the bride and grooms family members! Aro will be DELIGHTED to host such a great affair! I can't wait to see how the wedding will affect the way that Bella and Jasper can out maneuver Aro, and his 'puppeteer', whomever that may be! I'll be looking for it, it should be very good indeed! Thank you, Lady Skyelite.
twimama77 chapter 22 . 1/13/2014
SO VERY VERY AWESOME!
KEZZ 1 chapter 22 . 1/13/2014
Great chapter as always i am looking forward to more
bbutterfly689 chapter 21 . 1/11/2014
This is just awesome. A great story, I had to reread it again to get a full understanding of it. Poor Edward and yes I think Aro has more powers than he ever disclosed to anyone. For Eleazar to suddenly not recall certain events and not piece things together something is definitely foul in Volterra. And I think Around is behind it all!
Holidai chapter 21 . 1/5/2014
Oh my, I had no idea you'd begun writing this story again. I am so happy! I loved this update and the one previous. I truly hope they can end the Volturi. Poor Edward, I do like that he redeemed himself in the end. I am sad that he is dead. I hope they have no other casualties. I also hope Aro suffers.
Ca.zaphira chapter 21 . 1/2/2014
An amazing story! Looking forward to more. Keep up the good ork.
My Eyez Are Watching Everyone chapter 21 . 12/29/2013
oh my goodness! can't wait for the update.
1dreamkeeper chapter 21 . 12/29/2013
ARO I hope you get it in the end
xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 21 . 12/24/2013
Great chapter! Please continue! Take care! :)
Cheryl Grant chapter 21 . 12/24/2013
Aro is a Saturno, isn't he? What I'm figuring is that he can not only read your mind but also alter it ...
CentauRita chapter 21 . 12/23/2013
You truly weave a magnificent web and I am caught.
Nonita chapter 21 . 12/23/2013
Please update asap!
NatalieLynn chapter 21 . 12/23/2013
Really exciting chapter! Okay, I'm thinking either Aro can alter or implant thoughts as easily as he can read them or that Chelsea can compel belief of an idea as well as devotion to a manufactured bond. Then when Edward tasted Bella's blood, enough of the power of her shield was brought into him with her blood both severed the compelled bond and exposed his true memories and thoughts, and his death became necessary to prevent the discovery of the hidden talent. Whether the puppeteer is Aro alone or Chelsea is his hidden partner, I think both Caius and Marcus are as bound and blinded as Edward. Eleazar and Irwin have also been affected.
cathy29jes chapter 21 . 12/23/2013
hello
Aro played once too often, I think it has to be a mortal enemy with Bella and Edward's murder will not go unpunished, Aro will die and those who are helped kill Edward will die with him,
great chapter,
cathy
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