|Reviews for Children of Saturn, Book 1: What Have We Done|
| Babysis64 chapter 9 . 3/6
oh no if Laurent is close to her that would mean Victoria is close as well right. I hope that Bella can protect herself from him and I wonder what the Denali would think of seeing him again. I hope that Jasper feels her fear and gets to her in time right.
| Babysis64 chapter 8 . 3/6
I wonder what happened why Jasper asked Bella to have a human moment. I hope that Bella is going to be okay and with the other vampires around. I wonder what Eleazar would think about Bella right.
| Babysis64 chapter 7 . 3/5
this was a good chapter I thought as well. Why would Jasper ask Bella for a kiss unless he and Bella are true mates. I guess to keep reading then we will eventually find out.
| Babysis64 chapter 6 . 3/5
wow so Bella knows about the shifters now, hopefully they will keep their tribe and the humans safe as they can. I wonder if Jasper will call Peter and Charlotte for help as well. Interesting I think. I wonder if Jasper will find his true mate, I didn't hear them talk about any electrical forces between them so just friends as well
| Babysis64 chapter 5 . 3/5
this was a good chapter as well. Glad that Jasper and Bella got to talk about stuff, and her pain right.
| Babysis64 chapter 4 . 3/4
this was a interesting chapter. Glad that Bella finally left the house to go out with Angela and Ben. Too bad though that Bella almost got raped at the movie theater. Glad that Jasper saved her though.
| Babysis64 chapter 3 . 3/2
this was a good chapter be good that Bella can get enough rest maybe she will want to do things for herself again right. \hopefully anyways.
| Babysis64 chapter 2 . 3/2
this was a good chapter as well. Yes I sure hope that Jasper can help Bella slowly to heal within herself right.
| Babysis64 chapter 1 . 3/2
wow this was different, especially for Alice to get upset like that just because Jasper asked her to check in on Bella through her ability.
| amy.campbell.378199 chapter 23 . 11/9/2017
This story really ends on a sad note. I understand that it is meant to set up the second book but still it would have been nice to have something positive.
| amy.campbell.378199 chapter 21 . 11/9/2017
What an end for Edward... Sad :(
| Kimberlately chapter 24 . 8/16/2017
This was...wow! What a great way to end this story. It was love and celebration and joy and ownership of their moment. Wonderful.
Also, I like what you did with the wolves and Quilutes. There was duty but there was also reason and compassion. No mindless, genetic hate. They knew the difference between friends and enemies no matter the species. Loved the phrase "...chewed up trio".
Speaking of the Whitlock, "Copia, sed ipse." Perfect.
| Michelle Law chapter 12 . 7/16/2017
I think this is one of the most imaginative and well written fan fiction I've ever read. Thanks for not making J/B fall into bed the 2nd day! that happens WAY too many times with these things! It is funny; I like the AH B/E fiction and the canon Characters J/B fiction better than the other way around, mostly.
I really enjoyed "The day the Earth Stood Still" which was a sort of retelling of Twilight from Edward's POV but not wedded to the original like Midnight Sun.
| celajwhitney chapter 18 . 6/7/2017
edward is a total ass. what is he doing, if he can't have her he wants her killed?
| celajwhitney chapter 15 . 6/7/2017
pompous ass! who does he think he is "i'll make you love me again"? what a jerk, telling her he loves her after what he said to her in the woods.