|Reviews for Children of Saturn, Book 1: What Have We Done|
| inufan4everaday chapter 23 . 3/9
I have to say this has got to be one of my FAVORITE stories. I LOVE it! I can't wait till you continue it. Please hurry! :)
| acetwolf94 chapter 23 . 3/8
| Fakin'it chapter 23 . 3/8
I thought it would've been a good plan for Carlisle to be gathering her blood as soon as they knew what it could do and then put it into the blood supply for the reception so all the vampires present would be freed at the same moment. There's nothing Aro could've done when faced with all of them.
| Vianca chapter 23 . 3/8
Gah! You can't leave it there! Damn...
Okay, great final chapter. I loved the bits of rebellion at the wedding, and I like that you actually had Bella freak out a little right before her change. Born-to-be vamp or not, she had no idea such things existed for 17 yrs. Having her finally lose it, if only for a minute, is much more realistic, and very Matrix; red pill or blue pill. That's one of the cool things about this story/series: it's like a hybrid of Twilight, Matrix, Percy Jackson, and a bit of Hunger Games. This friendship with Jane is an interesting twist, and I suspect Peter's vision of her saving Bella happens in COS2ch1, but I have a bad feeling about it, like Bella's guilt over keeping her and Jude apart was foreshadowing something bad happening to her... Props for making Maria good, btw. That's also highly original. Overall, excellent first book. Looking forward to the next two. :)
| GaijinVamp chapter 23 . 3/8
Very good first third of the series. I'm looking forward to the next book.
Did Bella have the idea to save some of her blood? If Marcus could break his bond to Chelsea, perhaps he would know who really killed Didyme. Because it's obvious that Aro has implanted false memories again to reinforce his control.
| XxJasper'sAngelxX chapter 23 . 3/8
Aro is truly evil. Can't wait to see Book 2
| IhrtTwlght chapter 3 . 3/8
She probably really needs that sleep.
| IhrtTwlght chapter 2 . 3/8
Wow hopefully he actually talks to her soon.
| IhrtTwlght chapter 1 . 3/8
Great start! I hope Alice isn't a bad person in this one
| mickkila chapter 23 . 3/8
Awesome fantastic and I was shocked at that twist
| MYWINTERFIREFLY4 chapter 23 . 3/8
That was great! I had a thought that maybe you should have added Bella's blood to their "drinks" and then they would have been shielded . anyways so good can't wait to read the next book. :)
| Kuragehime94 chapter 23 . 3/8
(O_O)...holy hell. That, was not the ending that I was expecting. And the Aro being a Saturno? Yeah, didn't see that coming either, but now I REALLY want to know what happens, well, more-so then I did already. And boy do I feel bad for Marcus, not so much Chelsea. He's gonna be stuck with her forever...freaking sucks man. Oh! Is he going to be salvageable? Please tell me he's saved from having to deal with Aro and his ilk. Or at least given a good death. Oh god, so many questions...
| Lady Skyelite chapter 23 . 3/8
Yes, Jasper and Bella got married, and she IS a full Vampire now - but NOT the way that Aro Volturi wanted, was it? Now that she IS a vampire, and has FULL control of her bloodlust, Aro STILL wants to keep her as his little toy, doesn't he? And HE is the other Saturno in Volterra - I did NOT see that one coming! But I do have the feeling that he just 'bit' off a LOT more than he could EVER have chewed, and he is so arrogant and ego-driven that he's the only one who doesn't realize it yet! Is this the time that Jane saves Bella's life? I hope so, and I also hope that she is able to get out of Volterra with Bella and Jasper, maybe even with her brother, not that I'm all that worried about the little brat! I did enjoy what Alice did to the wedding dress, and how all the scheming to make Bella feel self-conscious about her scars at her WEDDING failed, miserably! Now that Aro has 'shown his hand' so to speak, what will happen now? He is playing with fire, and Bella is a flamethrower that he is thinking is a wet match! I ALMOST feel sorry for the moron, ALMOST! Will Bella be able to expose him for what he really is, and make sure that he goes down - painfully? Right along with any of the other's who have WILLINGLY assisted him? The ones that he has 'tampered with' shouldn't be punished for the sake of a megalomaniac who believes that HE IS GOD! I can't wait to see the first chapter of COS 2, it will be a great story, I just 'know' it! Thank you, Lady Skyelite.
| Olivia Williams chapter 22 . 2/28
hope you update soon I love this story
| mickkila chapter 22 . 2/24
Please finish this story it's awesome