| Reviews for Children of Saturn |
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  Shawna chapter 4 . 4/29/2019 Another wonderful chapter! I loved when Jasper attacked the men in the bathroom with Bella and saved Bella's life. Good action! Keep up the good work! |
| Shawna chapter 3 . 4/29/2019 Another great chapter. Keep up the good work. |
| Shawna chapter 2 . 4/29/2019 Another great chapter. I loved how Jasper felt Bella's terrible emotions and how they effected him. Keep up the good work. |
| Shawna chapter 1 . 4/29/2019 Great first chapter. Keep up the good work. |
 TinaF chapter 23 . 3/6/2019 Wonderful story! Thank you for writing and sharing it. |
| DawnLeon chapter 23 . 2/23/2019 I found other Jasper and Bella stories but they weren't finished and nothing like yours. I love the story and beautifully written. Still sad about Edward's passing, he could've found his mate but it all made sense. Ok, onto the next part. |
| DawnLeon chapter 22 . 2/13/2019 You had me bawling like a little baby with the dream and the exchange with Char and Peter. I guess when you put it that way it makes sense what needed to be done with Edward but still suck. |
| DawnLeon chapter 21 . 2/12/2019 NO NO NO NO NO NO¡! WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!? APPARENTLY EDWARD WAS BEING TRICKED BUYLT BY WHO!? ONCE HE TATSED BELLAS BLOOD HE CAME OUT OF THAT TRANCE! NO9OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! PLEASE NO. |
| DawnLeon chapter 18 . 2/12/2019 Why make Edward the villain? I don't mind Bella and Jasper, but why make him a villain? NOOOOOO. Lol. Crap... |
| Bella Marie Whitlock chapter 23 . 1/20/2019 *Caution, this review contains spoilers!* Dun, dun, dun! Looking forward to reading the sequel! Fairly certain Jane's gonna save her, thankfully. I was surprised at Aro being a Saturno, but it makes sense. Anyway, you're an exceptional writer and I loved reading this! |
| Bella Marie Whitlock chapter 22 . 1/20/2019 Looks like they're getting things figured out! Love Jasper and Bella's brief reprieve from the chaos! They're so dang adorable! |
| Bella Marie Whitlock chapter 21 . 1/19/2019 Very interesting. I'm intrigued |
| Bella Marie Whitlock chapter 20 . 1/19/2019 I'm confused but that's probably just me, lol! |
| Bella Marie Whitlock chapter 19 . 1/19/2019 Snap! I was like, no! Why are we going to Volterra? Then I realized it was to meet Irwin! :'-D Love it! |
| Bella Marie Whitlock chapter 18 . 1/19/2019 Good that the tribe was supportive! Damn that Edward though! |