Reviews for Naar L├Žnkerne Brytes
yly chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Good stuff. I love the way you are working with the Corps. That and the Aesir. Everything's good.
A.J. Starhiker chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
I liked this one. I've done some reading in the Norse mythologies and thought it was interesting you replaced Odin's ravens with Merlin and Roma.

Just a couple points on the language parts. When Alfred meets Seagar, he asks "Vil du snakke Norsk?" I've learned a bit of Norwegian, and that wording has Alfred politely asking Seagar to speak Norsk. The way I've always heard it is "Kann du snakke Norsk?"

Anyway, I thought his reaction to being taken out of a WWII and dropped into the 70's was priceless.