Reviews for What Could Have Been
jonski chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
If only Lily knows Snape wants his son Harry and James dead.
ElenaDarren chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Not bad.
Escoger chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
That was hilarious! It completely made my day!)
jn.v13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
LOL!

"But I love you! I...oh, whatever."

hilarious.
MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
It was OOC, but this is a parody, so it works here.
snevans78 chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
hey that was really funny! especially this: "Lily: Let’s call him Harry, and raise him not to be prejudiced against Muggle-borns, unlike persons who shall remain nameless (and shampoo-less)."

Lol, but still, I don't really like the end, because Snape is sort of a hypocrite (meaning, he's arrogant and selfish himself! Don't get my wrong, he is my fav character in the series and I found his story touching, but Lily wouldn't choose him over James. You could tell she preferred James even before they got married).

But anyways, the story was really funny and I enjoyed reading!
mercurywrites chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
The ending is funny: "But I love you! I...oh, whatever."

I wish you put it into actual story form, I think it would be better that way.

It's still funny though.
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Yay! Now this is how it should have happened! (thinks hard about people who adore bullies and the women who marry them...er, the bullies, that is).