|Reviews for What Could Have Been|
| jonski chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
If only Lily knows Snape wants his son Harry and James dead.
| ElenaDarren chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
| Escoger chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
That was hilarious! It completely made my day!)
| jn.v13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
"But I love you! I...oh, whatever."
| MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
It was OOC, but this is a parody, so it works here.
| snevans78 chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
hey that was really funny! especially this: "Lily: Let’s call him Harry, and raise him not to be prejudiced against Muggle-borns, unlike persons who shall remain nameless (and shampoo-less)."
Lol, but still, I don't really like the end, because Snape is sort of a hypocrite (meaning, he's arrogant and selfish himself! Don't get my wrong, he is my fav character in the series and I found his story touching, but Lily wouldn't choose him over James. You could tell she preferred James even before they got married).
But anyways, the story was really funny and I enjoyed reading!
| mercurywrites chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
The ending is funny: "But I love you! I...oh, whatever."
I wish you put it into actual story form, I think it would be better that way.
It's still funny though.
| excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Yay! Now this is how it should have happened! (thinks hard about people who adore bullies and the women who marry them...er, the bullies, that is).