Reviews for Love at first sight
dead-angels-command chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
**smiles like the cheshire cat**
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
wow
light ladybug chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
luv it! thank you for writing!
DancingFlames18 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
I like it. It was good. Though I hoped you make some kind of story to go with it. You are a good wrighter I will give you that. I kind of hate it when the author drags the story out and your like come on what more could there be if it's not importent then skip it!
TheMischieveous chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
This was crap. Not even the good kind of crap that's on MTV. I mean, really, chick did you fucking read the books? Apparently not. You suck at writing-ALL THE OFFENSE! I mean really, (what's your name? I'm gonna call you Lisa...deal with it.) Lisa what the fuck were you thinking? First off, "the teen's" name is HARRY FUCKING POTTER. What the hell was with all that "the teen" shit? Secondly, why the hell would you make Lord Voldemort so sadly-fucking-submissive-no-balls-disgustingly gay! He's LORD FUCKING VOLDEMORT! He kills bitches for breakfast! Don't get me wrong, I love gays, but DAMN! you made me hate them there for a second. Sweetie, stop writing this shit;it's sad. Now, feel free to fuck up someone else's favorite fandom. But damn, Lisa stop this shit. I mean "the Raven"? Who the fuck do you think you are? Edgar Allen Poe? Also, how the hell does someone's hair grow to their waist in three years? I've been growing my hair for four years and it barely touches my damn shoulders. And what the fuck was with the nick names? I wanted to puke. Not to mention how the hell did harr- oops I mean "the
Teen" fucking survive the killing curse? He would have died dammit! Also what fucking spell was he using to tear apart all those damn people? Bitch, put the damn spell he uses next time or at least write a back story! Sweetheart, this may seem harsh but...there's only so much bullshit one can put into a story before I have to comment. Have you tried...drawing, singing, hell watch a damn movie if you're feeling creative, just stop writing Harry Potter fiction or least read the damn books first or something because this shit was jank.
Sincerely,
Rynn (This is my friend's account. She shouldn't have left this page open. :) )

And that was the extent of your daily hate rant thanks for reading :)
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
lovely xxx
KLS-Blueskies chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
The way you took out dumbles made me notice something. You are a cruel devious person...I absolutely Love It :D
ShadowFire91 chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
Not bad.
mnaybe you could write a little more about the relationship between Harry and Tom. It was a little bit fast, how it started.
Go on like this :)
greetings ShadowFire :)
Master-of-Masters chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Awesome story
I think it worked really well with Dumbledore actually liking Harry, though I personally always thought the Dumbledore was a bit of a bastard
anyway good work
Ja Ne
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Ha ha ha, Voldemort as the "pet"... Priceless.
jupimako chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Nice! Really enjoyed this one too!
beccabam chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Love this story xxx
triwizahrd chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
So cute! Well, the death scenes were awesome, not cute, but all together I loved it!
Vein's chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Love this xD
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
heyoo3
im so proud of you (_)
and happy that i found such a good
writter like you ( )
good work (x)
d3cky
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