Reviews for Alternative Jinchuu story
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 8 . 8/13/2009
Very cute.

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 7 . 8/13/2009
Nice job.

ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 6 . 8/13/2009
Okay then.. Didnt really expect that. /

ARi chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 5 . 8/13/2009
Eh? O_O

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 4 . 8/13/2009
O

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 3 . 8/13/2009
Dun Dun dun. Funny thing that they actually know where his hide out is.. and the fact taht they know what he looks like.

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 2 . 8/13/2009
Nice.

Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Nice job. A bit short but that is alright. However I believe that Tomoe did forgive him- while in the process of loving him. But that is my opinion.

ari chan
miniwoo chapter 8 . 7/29/2009
You wrote pretty well for having English as a secondary language, actually I've seen worse from English only speakers! Good job, short and sweet.
KatieB19 chapter 8 . 6/6/2009
your story is aweasome