|Reviews for Shore Leave|
| Defiant.Anjeru chapter 90 . 5/2/2013
I absolutely love your drabbles. *lovelovelovelovelovelovelove*
| Eleneri chapter 90 . 4/6/2013
This is just darned cute. I was hoping for just such an ending, and you provided it beautifully. Thank you!
| Eleneri chapter 88 . 4/6/2013
"You'd be better off somewhere else," they said.
"She needs me right here," he replied.
"She doesn't even know you're here."
"But I do."
This was so beautiful. But what made me cry was this: "I wouldn't entrust this privilege to anyone else."
Sarah watched them shuffle away to a groundcar driven by an asari of all people and reflected that perhaps she had a few things to learn about love.
| Eleneri chapter 87 . 4/6/2013
This. Is. Awesome!
Are you tired of me saying that? If you are, I suggest you don't read any subsequent reviews I may write for your work, because I greatly suspect the term "awesome" may creep in there...
| Eleneri chapter 86 . 4/6/2013
This scene - minus Javik throwing up in the bathroom - is now my headcanon for how the morning after went. It was decidedly lackluster from a romance standpoint. Thank goodness for fanfic, where we can address those grievances, yes?
| Eleneri chapter 84 . 4/6/2013
Kasumi-san, you are totally, totally awesome!
| Eleneri chapter 83 . 4/6/2013
What a lovely tryptich look at "stillness"! Very, very well written!
| Eleneri chapter 82 . 4/6/2013
Shepard's legendary inability to drive a Mako is a running joke in my own stories. I bet my squad wishes their Kaidan had worked out a deal like yours did. Hehe!
| Eleneri chapter 81 . 4/6/2013
I love everything about this prompt; the metaphors, the lyric quality of the narrative, the flow of the relationship. Most of all, I love how Ash prays over James, prays with him, prays for him, and how he'll be waiting for her, either here, or in Heaven.
Beautiful. Thank you for writing this.
| Eleneri chapter 80 . 4/6/2013
Loved this one. Tea and memory, and "What's your opinion on the last mission?". How many times has Shepard asked that question? It's a great line that does indeed put everything back on normal footing. I love it.
| Eleneri chapter 77 . 4/6/2013
Hmm. I always knew Starbrat needed a permanent time out...
| Eleneri chapter 75 . 4/6/2013
This is a great recrafting of Hunger Games and Mass Effect!
| Eleneri chapter 74 . 4/6/2013
The combat boot print was the best part of this whole story. OK, that, and the idea of a shirtless Kaidan. And Kaidan losing his temper and letting his biotics loose with Traynor.
| Eleneri chapter 73 . 4/6/2013
James and Ash have a little friendly vibe going on in this prompt. Great fun to read; the dialogue flows very naturally.
| Eleneri chapter 72 . 4/6/2013
Ah, now, Joker, you and Kaidan should start the "why did I push the woman I love away" club. You did a great job showing the devolution of Joker/Ashley and the evolution of Ashley/James.