Reviews for Welcome to Your Nightmare
Heartless BytchhakaHelenBach1 chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Thanks KK, great atmosphere in this one. Did you write it before Sam did kill Lilith on the Show?
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Excellent! D
ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Another awesome fic from you Karen. Not sure I got it right but I took Lilith to be in Sam's head rather than an actual presence which made it all the more powerful the hold she had on him and the fact that he couldn't really fight against her, and compounded his guilt at lying to Dean. Her being a physical presence would also work as could produce the same effect. Loved how Dean instinctively knew there was something wrong with Sam but didn't press the issue when Sam put his wobbliness down to lack of food. Said so much that Dean would share his m&m's with Sam, it's often gestures not words that say how much you love someone.

Perfect ending - Thinking was mine. I'd broken promises, broken trust. A sacred vow between brothers. How could Dean ever trust me again. I'd used my powers after I said I wouldn't. Reasons why didn't matter. One lie after another I'd told, deceiving not only Dean but myself. I started down the dark slippery slope…and now I was scared there would be no turning back. There was such a fine line between right and wrong. Love and hate. Good and evil. I could only pray my mistakes and my judgment calls wouldn't prove fatal. All that mattered to me now was what was sitting next to me in the driver's seat. Dean had been hurt enough.

Anger and hatred only bred more anger and hatred. Wars had started and millions died because of one man's fatal mistake. One small lie. I wouldn't let this power, this weapon of destruction in the dark reaches of my gut destroy all that I had left in this world.

I looked out the window, eating one M&M at a time. Dean wasn't going back to hell. I wasn't going dark side. The sixty-sixth seal would never be broken. Lucifer wasn't walking free, and I'd have Lilith's head.

Bloody.

On a plate.

So help me!

You really got inside Sam's head there, showed his torment and guilt at lying to Dean and all his good intentions were for nothing - if only Sam (and Dean) had known that killing Lilith was breaking the 66th seal, setting Lucifer free.

Powerful words Karen, loved this.
RisingSun chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Really well written! Loved it. exspecially hurt!Sam

I rly like your writing style
supernaturalsammy67 chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
wow! omg hun

loved this fic!

really dark twist and i loved this fic so much!

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Hollow-Willow chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
One or two grammatical mistakes, but who cares when you used an uber cool DEFCON (DEFense readiness CONdition)analogy? Too cool man. Too cool. Fluid writing as well.
zoeysgirl chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
You are a gifted writer. I love reading your stories.
casammy.armoasantander019gmai chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
muy buena la historia por q solo un capi hubiera quedado bien en todo caso llegar hasta el 4 x14 x q no lo intenta le aseguró que tendrán muchos lectores, pienselo y continue
LaylaBinx chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Ah! You're stories are always so good! Great job, once again! .