|Reviews for A Good Start to a New Year|
| PhoenixRe chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Sweet and fluffy...
I too became flushed from the embarrassment of the two :P
| lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Nice work on this. Keep at it.
| mikal chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Is this over already?
At first I wondered why you didn't have any reviews, and I thought that the story was going to suck, but not really.
But I also think that you can make a better work, for example, you can leave a few spaces between scenes so when you're reading it, it doesn't change drastically.
Another thing you can improve is definitely the ending, it feels as if the story doesn't have a climax, so the resolution it's kind of lame.
It'd help you to try to think of a plot, the climax and the resolution before writing the story.
I think that by improving that your story'd be a hundred times better.
I expect to read another work of yours soon!
Keep it up