Reviews for Permanence
Xxmgxx3445xX chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
I loved this story. The emotions of not belonging in your own hometown anymore were so real, something I can completely relate to, and just so like /them/. It was perfect.

The story could have ended at the river scene without a problem but I love how it continued to the train ride.

I thought it was nice how you wrote Ed's and Winry's relationship. They did just suddenly say I LOVE YOU! and get together. Kudos to you for the subtlety (:


gnomieasuma chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I loved this one! It reminded me of the end of LotR, why does fixing the world change people so they just don't belong anymore? Do you know what I mean? Augh now I'm depressed AND I still haven't finished studying for Japanese tomorrow augh. Curse you for making me fel!
Took-Baggins chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
this was a fantastic fic! thanks for sharing it with us!
xmystorytime chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
I died from the cuteness. I
Jojoushi chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Absolutely gorgeous- what an incredibly refreshing read. I am so happy to be able to read small gems like this. I look forward to more of your writing!
Orange Singer chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
Yay for over 90 jokes! Awesome story. I love the EdWin hints.