|Reviews for An Apple a Day|
| blackkyu chapter 22 . 2/28
Indeed, very cute!
| A Person chapter 1 . 1/13
The line "Do you have extreme thirst?" is much funnier given the connotation of the word 'thirsty' nowadays
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/3/2013
OMG! humiliatingly enough I take gummy vitamins too, so I did understand that part. i'm so unhealthy. I just had to comment on this chapter! I was planning to at the end, but the gummy vitamins forced me to!
| machi-pan chapter 22 . 9/30/2013
| TheMoonShallDiee chapter 15 . 8/21/2013
This is PERFECT.
Lol, I read the PotC reference in Barbossa's voice xDD
You even got the little joke with Lighto/Raito! I totally love you for writing this!
| TheMoonShallDiee chapter 7 . 8/20/2013
Oh my gosh! This is totally amazing! I love this so very much x3
| mamita chapter 22 . 8/11/2013
Hello, I liked your fic, I love how you did the fic, but it's a shame that there were no more sex between L and Light, but have resisted a lot, I like it when Light is vulnerable, and "care "someone, like L, Matt, Mello and Near, even BB, is well, thank you and kisses.
| Rei chapter 10 . 8/1/2013
Aww I really like this chapter
| yukikosnow139 chapter 22 . 7/10/2013
This is the perfect story! It has humor, horror, romance, and suspense! It was cute and funny!
| Avengel Azrael chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
You made me laugh my butt off again with this chapter so thank you. More importantly, did you get arrested for taking too many pictures? I love your author notes by the way, i like reading them as much as the chapters.
| WILLOWS chapter 22 . 6/25/2013
I enjoyed this fic very much as the constant and rather akward interaction between L and Ratio kept me fully engaged. Unfortunatly after L lost the bet you added quite a few rather pointless and frustrating chapters emphasizing facts we already knew. It was like a train of filler episodes in Drogon Ball Z or Naruto. Also the introduction of Beyond was frustrating as well. It felt like you just shoved him in for no reason other than to be completely annoying. Other than those unfortunate and dissapointing choices I did like the idea and the character development. Thank you.
| kazue chapter 22 . 3/27/2013
1) love this
2) love how you develop LxLight interaction (and of course top)
3) love the gory details of the victims
4) a little shaky on L fight with Isha
5) and finally, love the dream scene, especially with Prince raito and elf with with one wish ... makes me sad as well
| Love Psycho chapter 22 . 3/22/2013
This was amazing! Wonderfully done! Adorable, funny, some angst and, of course, murder.
I am a very disturbed person to really like your murder descriptions. Then again, I'm trying to write a story that has...unconventional murders myself...
-hands over platter- Magic cupcakes for you!
| BlaRiix chapter 18 . 2/5/2013
I almost thought that Billy Bob was Matt! Hahaha
| BlaRiix chapter 13 . 2/4/2013
I love how B was introduced in chapter thirteen! ;)