Reviews for An Apple a Day
MathKitten chapter 22 . 7/7
"battle royale-like kiss" im dying

also that was the hottest lawlight sex ive ever read

Okay. So. It's been 9 years like i said before and you probably won't see this. But. I felt the need to leave a second long review as my final review. I binge read this story in two days, and I say with complete honesty that this has become my favorite lawlight fanfiction. The plot developed so smoothly, and you incorporated so many different genres into the story without making it too complicated. The romance was cute, in character, and sweet, the mystery was gripping and suspenseful, and every other element was executed perfectly. The banter between L and Light was so cute and worked so well with the characters' personalities. Also, congrats on finishing your first multi-chapter story! It's so good that I would never be able to guess it was someone's first story. There are some lines and scenes here that I'll never forget *cough*VIAGRA*cough*... AND the ending wasn't abrupt or forced, and I felt satisfied with how the story concluded. I think I'm beginning to repeat myself (did i mention i LOVe this fic? no? well, let me tell you...) so I'll end my review here...

thank you for bringing this beautiful creation into the world!
MathKitten chapter 21 . 7/7
awwwwwwww 3 i ship it so much! this is amazing and i lovei ttt
MathKitten chapter 19 . 7/7
omng omg L noooo

also (diet) COKE IS BETTER
but regular pepsi is better
MathKitten chapter 17 . 7/7
NOOO THE CLIFFHANGER

L IS U OK

NUUU MYT CHILD

AJDKSFLHKLSDJKF PLS DONT DIE maH cHILD

im sobbing
MathKitten chapter 16 . 7/7
omg i loved the dreams! DfhjsLKDJ this fic is amazing
MathKitten chapter 15 . 7/7
i loved the fairy tale dream! also billy bob...hes B isnt he?

dun dun duuuunnnn

*such a cliffhanger thooo*
MathKitten chapter 14 . 7/7
bahahahah ryuk tho

also im scared for light hE cAnT dIe and he needs L ;-;
MathKitten chapter 11 . 7/6
asjdhfldks so much angst but i love it
MathKitten chapter 10 . 7/6
omg nuuuuuu poor L ;-;
will he still chexk on light?
MathKitten chapter 8 . 7/6
oops this is a short review but

L wants to 'tap that' ;)

also im screaming that kiss on the cheek from light aasdflkjsdn falksd
MathKitten chapter 6 . 7/6
"an aggressive top" omg i remember that line xD
MathKitten chapter 7 . 7/6
hmm a long review? you said you like long reviews the most so here i go xD

Honestly, this is one of my favorite fanfictions in the Death Note archive. It's gripping (I'm writing this review at midnight), humorous, and isn't OOC at all. I loved the another note book reference in the previous chapter (which mentioned in another review) and it's amazing how you can so easily weave humor and murder mystery together. I'm unable to put my laptop down, and I love the development in L and raito's relationship! I'm aware this review is nearly a decade late, and you most likely won't read it, but I felt the need to express how much I've enjoyed the first seven chapters of your fanfiction.

i tried xP
MathKitten chapter 4 . 7/6
awwwww...L sleeping on raito is so cute ;p
raito we all know you like L stop denying it and dont break his poor heart :(

(this fic is amazing holy frikc)
MathKitten chapter 3 . 7/6
hopefully im not annoying by reviewing every chapter :p

anyways

L saying "boo" gives me life

also this fic is still gOlD
MathKitten chapter 2 . 7/6
"he's probably in the middle of an important thought process"
and L's just daydreaming about light xD

this fanfic is qUaLitY
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