|Reviews for Muddy Water's|
| jkp13452 chapter 4 . 6/26/2009
its good a little slow moving for my taste but it is still good
| TaraJ93 chapter 4 . 6/7/2009
really liked the chapter...
keep up the good work
wen is chapter 5 goin up?
| whitezcar chapter 4 . 4/15/2009
Amazing! If you don't have a beta, I would be interested in helping you out!
I can't wait for another update!
| whitezcar chapter 3 . 4/15/2009
I loved it!
BTW- That is your smiley face for the day, because I am just that cool! :)
| EdwardismyFav chapter 4 . 3/30/2009
Slightly confused at the end... In the last chapter it says that Alice left to go back to his place since they had to go to the station but at the end of this one it she knows nothing about it.
Other then that good story so far :)
| Caticat15 chapter 4 . 3/19/2009
good story. might want to change the pov to jazz and alice once and a while. keep writing!
| shortieecakee chapter 4 . 2/21/2009
i thought it was a cute chapter!good job!
| A is for Angel chapter 4 . 2/21/2009
hope u feel better soon:)
| sara chapter 3 . 2/18/2009
I keep checking all the time to see if you have updated yet. You hold me captivated with your words. Keep it up. :) Watch on the names though, I think you get them mixed up sometimes when you're caught in the moment.
| latuacantante4him chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
Glad she was able to knock Mike out. Enjoyed it.
| udita chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
| jackiehyde4eva chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
Ugh Mike is seriously creepy, poor Bella! This was fantastically written i LOVE itthis is definently turning out to be one of the best stories ive ever read
great job :)
| A is for Angel chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
cant wait for more:p
| No1Longer1using1account chapter 3 . 2/16/2009
| latuacantante4him chapter 2 . 2/15/2009
Enjoyed it. Very cute.