Reviews for I'll Protect You, Always
SpartanGamer2013 chapter 6 . 3/10/2009
Awesome chapter! Update soon!

God Bless!
Sinful Serenata chapter 5 . 3/10/2009
I watched "Diary of a Mad Black Woman" the other day where this woman was kind of in an abusive relationship... and when haruhi poured the hot soup all over him it reminded me of what madea (look her up on youtube, she's awesome) said XDD

cool chapter
SpartanGamer2013 chapter 5 . 3/9/2009
Good chapter! Update soon!

God Bless!
keeperofthedarkarts chapter 5 . 3/6/2009
i really like the plot linr and all, but instead of ruining haruhi' sreputation as a lawyer, couldn't they just have called hunny senpai? cuz ha could finish off koji in one makes more sense that way...but i think its erally good! )
KonekoPanda-Hime chapter 5 . 3/5/2009
oh thats it(jumps into computer and kill koji.)"TAKE THAT YOU WOMEN BEATING BASTARD!ONLY COWARDS BEAT YOU BASTARD!"
xXxshikatema4evaxXx chapter 5 . 3/4/2009
Run fast Tamaki!
kirby163 chapter 5 . 3/4/2009
Ahh man you get us all worked up and then leave us hanging? you're mean. (this was a joke BTW)

I hate chiffhangers! I can't wait to see what happends next!

JeanKazuhiza chapter 5 . 3/4/2009
Tamaki shall save Haruhi! Before Koji kills her!

Update Soon!
Sinful Serenata chapter 3 . 2/28/2009
poor haruhi :/
SpartanGamer2013 chapter 4 . 2/28/2009
Hm...this is pretty good, Ryo. But, I do have some con crit for you. For one, you need to work on your tenses; try to keep them on one tense and not switching between them. Another thing is that you could try to be a bit more descriptive with your chapters; like give thoughts on the characters and describe the area that they are at if you introuduce it the first time.

Another thing that gets me iffy is the whole abuse thing. To be honest, it doesn't seem that believable. Now, I would believe it if Haruhi broke with Kyouya because she didn't love him anymore and then, meets Koji. Having as the seemingly perfect boyfriend at first and then slowly show his true side. I just can't see a guy beating a girl because she has a boyfriend unless he was trying to rape her or something. But that's my opinion.

Anyway, update soon!

God Bless!
FadedPhantom chapter 4 . 2/28/2009
No Tamaki! Fight back dammit! Gah, he'd better call the Host Club or something. Or maybe they'll find him in the alley? Well, either way, they'd better hurry! Host Club to the rescue!

Keep up the great work and please update soon
KonekoPanda-Hime chapter 4 . 2/28/2009
i'm really sorry ryo .but anyway if i was in this story i have haruhi stay at my house and next time he tried to beat haruhi i pull out a gun and say"STAY AWAY FROM MY HOUSE YOU GOT DAMN BASTARD!"
JeanKazuhiza chapter 4 . 2/28/2009
Poor Tamaki, someone must stop Koji before he kills Haruhi...
kirby163 chapter 3 . 2/26/2009

wah! someone tell the host club! they'll beat him to a plump!
FadedPhantom chapter 3 . 2/25/2009
Hey, sorry I didn't review last time, I was in a hurry, BUT I hate it when people don't review, so I'm reviewing now!

Cool story! Poor Haruhi :( I hope the Host Club rescues her soon! There are a few grammar/sentence structure errors, but other than that it's very good. Keep up the great work and please update soon!
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