Reviews for Bizzaro Twilight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well, good for the ladies . . . they all got hot sexy times with their men. Unfortunately, Rose lost her shit . . . but, it seems it may have been slightly expected. Alice's cryptic phone call seemed to answer some things. Best guess: It was either Esme or Carlisle she just spoke with. She had her vision long before coming to Forks and spoke to them about it. Then they 'banished' the women there as a ruse. Just an observation, that would make sense though. Also guessing, the transformation and control isn't as bad with your vampires as it was for Stephenie's. Meaning that in that week that Alice wrote on that note . . . Emmett and Rose will come back and Emmett will be fine, just changed. At least that's what I'm hoping for. I mentioned how I would hate for Charlie to be destroyed in this . . . either by losing his three sons or, by one of them eating the poor guy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Knew those women would win that game. The men had no chance in hell. Rose and Emmett were hot as hell together . . . then suddenly she's biting him . . . good grief, what has she done? And, why didn't Alice see Rose doing that? Wait, because it wasn't a thought out decision, it was sour of the moment and pure animalistic list. Yikes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was great when Edward went out to sketch and he felt like he was actually looking at himself through Bella's eyes that he just drew. I'm sure she was using her gift on him and that was why he had that feeling. Also, him smelling around him and realizing it smelled like her. Most likely she was there in the tree watching him, setting her scent off around him. Drinking game that the girls can't lose . . . this'll be really fun to read. When Charlie came home, it reminded me that he was their father. Meaning, if these three men suddenly 'die', it'll kill Charlie, losing them all at once. How do you get around that? It'll be interesting to see how. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was fantastically reversed and perfect. I've read stories where the water runs cold on Bella and her shower head, setting her screaming through her release. So, it makes perfect sense for the men to resort to holding their hands in ice to get themselves off. Brilliant!worried about Emmett. He's not as jovial as he usually is in fanfic. Hoping that's just his sexual frustration making him this way, as that is easily fixed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They are all just smitten with each other. The only thing you have me wondering though is, is this of their own free will? Meaning, I know the women projected themselves into their brains, but did they also manipulate the brains as well? Or, did they place themselves in their heads, to let the men do with them what they wished? Of their own free will? I hope this is all their choice, like Alice said it HAD to be, for it to work. Loved all the different POV's, that was really good. Fun so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a perfect little plan. It was great to listen to the three men speaking of the women to each other. All thinking that something must've happened to them out in the woods. West Nile Mad Cow Virus, had to have been one of the funniest things I've read. I almost spit my drink all over my iPad! Their love drunk actions when they saw their beauties in real life, was really spectacular. Edward lost his ability to go for more than one word answers. Jasper lost his ability to speak completely. So fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very intriguing. I've read one or two with Bella as the vampire and Edward human. However, never read one where the three women are vampires and the three men are not. This should be a fun ride. I'm on the fence with them forcing the dreams onto the men, to 'make' them want the women. Even though they are cannon couples. I imagine I'll come around and be completely on board. Seems quite fun so far though. Love that they think they are going out to a disturbance at the old Cullen home. When in fact they are going out to their destiny. Fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story. I especially love the eroticism of their bite scars. And I love that they are all turning out to have way cool talents. I love how this is not an E&B story, but equally everyone's. And I always love an Esme with brains as well as nurturing. Thank you for sharing all these cool characters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just change Jazz already... Jokes, I see why one at a time is best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot Damn! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your explanation of why Emmett change is fast...and that Esme changed Carlisle! Let the Hot Vampness that is Emmett begin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's cool that Edward & Rose are helping Emmett! Jasper has gifts too huh?! Great stuff! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bizarro alright! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too hot for words... Yum! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy! Well he did say "take me"...yeah...so, um , she was just being obliging?! |