Reviews for First
Adir Al-Assad chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
*FLAIL* OMG. YOU. APA fic? I kinda think I want to have your babies now. :) You know, in a figurative sense. Hi, my name is Eva Bradshaw, and I promise, I am not completely insane.

That aside, I loved this. It was powerful and painful, and left me saying both "aww" and "ouch" at the end. This is the way I'd like to think they went out. XD Paul Heyman and his promises of grandeur be damned.

Lovely work. :) I adored this.
XxShawns Guardian AngelxX chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
This right here was really well written. All your emotions come off really well. I know a lot of people are afraid to read Jibble fics and I'll admit that I'm still hesitant to read some too. I hate it when people don't grasp the psychology of his character but you did this really well. I couldn't have done it better myself. This is exactly how I pictured the APA and how Jibble and Ron just sort of gave up before actually exploring what could have been. Bravo!