Reviews for My World
Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
love it! cute! :)
Ms.JuliaGulia chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
dude u write some awsome stories! keep on writing!
GetDrunkOnVictory chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
I always think its so sweet when guys get their girlfriends a star. :)
tink3rb311ar3b31 chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
I hate you. This is absolutely, amazingly adorable! I hate cutesy stuff like this because it reminds me that I don't have it. (I don't really hate cutey stuff, I just say I do. Future referance, if I say something's really cute and I hate it, it means I love it!)

If you want a beta for your 1,2,3,4 story, I'd gladly help. Not saying you need one, but since you mentioned it here, I thought I'd offer. Let me know.

Can't wait for the next chapter of 1,2,3,4!

~Tink
hippogriff-tamer chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
aww he gave her a star! how many guys would do that? great story..and loved the song...
xox-Smiley-xox chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
:) :)
rosalie123 chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
aw I know that when I get a boyfriend I want him to be as sweet as Edward was
untranslatable chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
whATS THE LINK? IT MISSING THE FIRST HALF
kristina.cullen chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
I liked it a lot, but one detail slightly confused me. He's not eating, watching her sleep, running super fast, and living with the Cullens like vampire Edward, but he has green eyes. So is he human or vampire?
MissRebecca912 chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Really cute! :)
EBlove chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
this is a cute little story,

it reminds me of "A Walk To Remember"

when they are sitting there looking at starts, and he gave her a piece of paper.. he named a star for her.

its so cute :)

i would LOVE anyone who did that for me. haha
Happy Bells chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Hey! Aw really cute! I hope u write another story soon! :-)