|Reviews for Just One of the Guys|
| Jadeeeee chapter 27 . 5/13
I can't believe you gave up! It was so good. You are a great writer and i love this story. I wish you could finish it :-( :-( :-[
| Christie chapter 28 . 5/8
Will this be finished?
| lalitaduarte chapter 28 . 1/5
So saddddddddd... I want more... Since forever
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/31/2016
I'm so sad that was the last chapter... :(
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/16/2016
please finish this story!
| Joey Cullen chapter 28 . 8/8/2015
I've just read this again and I still love it like the 1st time I read it but really hope after 5 years you come back and finish this story as where all left hanging and you had wrote about amazing characters inc felix etc I just hope we get an ending! Take care
| Guest chapter 28 . 7/26/2015
every now and then I still check for updates from you, just now I came across blur's coffee and TV and missed this story.
Hope everything's good.
| Mnmlove chapter 28 . 11/7/2014
I love love love love this story. I love Jasper! He is so sweet. Please update soon!
| Guest chapter 27 . 10/10/2014
I miss this stor hope you are well!
| jk chapter 19 . 9/26/2014
No means no and all that but it does sound like she was a fuckin tease..always lookin like a slut making out with him for months but not putting out...yaaaa a tease I know that gives him no right but bitch needs to own her part I mean if or showing a guy or body and rubbing up oon him ..then surprised when he wants a release? I'm just saying
| jk chapter 16 . 9/26/2014
She doesn't care that he's a whore? One a whore always a whore I don't think that him not having ducked anyone in a year makes up for it...and how many chicks has he fucked? I mean he was a whore for years right soooo how many? 50? More? Bella should fuckin bounce! For real. She can do better! Who wants a manwhore who Likes comic books? And she has sexual issues so why would she want to be with a guy that can compare her to over a 100 girls? And after being raped why would she want to dirty herself with more dirty dick? She must feel dirty enough...a rapist and a manwhore...the only girls that duck shores are ones with no self respect!
| jk chapter 14 . 9/26/2014
I don't get it...just the mention of it makes her sob like a baby but she can't talk about it? Wtf? She's already there crying why not just say ya some dude broke in'raped me and killed my mom or whatever she's cryin'about...the stupid little insight we've been'getting...blue eyes...rage...anger...stupid! Fuck it was years ago seriously ,and she still can't talk about it...I'll never understand people that don't talk about their problems...duck in idiots...open book is soooo much easier..fuckin drama queens..no I couldn't possibly talk about it...but I'll cry in front of you so you feel bad for me
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/2/2014
I was confused by the chapter title, here This isn't so much the aftermath of Bella finally telling Edward her secret as it was ANOTHER telling of the same chapter you've already written twice (Edward & Bella POV of Helplessness and Hope) and NOW a third time again with Jasper's POV. Rereading the same thing over and over just to understand a different character's POV of the same scene is dull, boring and lacks creativity. Write in third person if you want the readers to get a feel of every character's mindset but it is poor form and shows laziness on your part to recycle the same bulk and then call it new because you've added a few different paragraphs not seen previously. The plot has not moved with this.
One other detail that is baffling: Nobody in the apartment can hear someone knocking on a door but all three (Edward, Bella AND Jasper) can hear keys jingling in a lock? o.O WTF kind of keys does Rosalie carry for them to be overheard of Rock Band 2? Did Rose simply tap her finger lightly against the door to begin with?
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
Fours years since an update is not real life stepping in the way. :(
Either this story is abandoned or you cannot find the gumption to come forward and say that it is a dead story and that no updates will further take place. Since it has been two years since any type of update from you, the former is more likely and I remove this story from my alerts with a heavy heart.
| musicnlyrics chapter 28 . 6/17/2014
I found this a couple of days ago, and I'm glad I did.
Thanks for sharing! :)