|Reviews for The Soul of a Dragon|
| Ai Star chapter 19 . 4/7
I am shocked Doan would try to defend Chase in a way :)
At first in a way I was excited about Xiaolin Chronicles but then as I watched some, I soon ended up not watching the rest since I slowly lost interest. In a way it was really dissapointing and the whole thing could have been better. In a way it just felt like a spin off than a sequel right?
| al2010 chapter 19 . 4/3
Thanks for updating! I really like your theory about Chronicles being a weird fanfic by Jack Spicer. It's not totally out of the realm of possibility considering what Adventure Time did with Fiona and Cake. I can't wait to read more and see what happens to Chase!
| lone goth-kitten chapter 19 . 4/3
Agree on the side note! XD
And good to have you back!
| Kalipsso chapter 1 . 6/17/2016
I will give you all I have If you continue the story... Its amazing, one of the best I've ever read actually... Why did you stop updating? :
| ARTGirl99 chapter 18 . 11/12/2015
Wow, I really like your stories! I read Time Slip as well and was really glad to see there was a sequel! Hope you continue the amazing work! :)
| Ai Star chapter 18 . 7/18/2015
OUCH! Tao is just plain mean!
I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep up the good work :)
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/11/2015
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/10/2014
| MyLittleAngelxxx chapter 18 . 10/21/2013
I absolutely love this idea of Chase being addicted to the soup and having a soul. Doan and Tao are complete morons and bullies. Hopefully, if they insult Chase and Kimiko (which they are likely to do) they end up been beaten humiliatingly by the both of them. That would be rather humorous.
Followed and Favourited!
Please update soon!
| NikaTurtle chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
I really love both this story and 'Time Slip'. I think you do a really great job with the personalities of the characters, the pacing, and the plot in general, but I do have a few things to note. This first may just be an issue of preference, but your sentences seem a little drawn out and wordy. I feel the story would flow better if fewer words were used, for example; turning "Rai got up and bowed to the master, then left the room" to "Rai rose and bowed to his master as he left". Kind of a bad example, since that bit was good already, but I hope you get the point. My other qualm is with the speech of some of the older characters, Chase, Fung, and to an extent, Guan. I feel like some of their dialogue is just too 'modern' considering they all use fairly formal, older speech patterns. Examples: Chase- "Shut up" to "Silence" "Quiet yourself" "Hold your tongue"etc. Fung- "Filled me in" to "Informed me" and "Your crush on her" to "Your affection/s for her". I'll admit, I'm less familiar with Guan, so I'm not sure if his speech was slightly modern in the show or not, I just thought I'd bring him up. I hope this was helpful.
| music909 chapter 18 . 6/22/2013
| Guest of Guest chapter 18 . 5/19/2013
So far, the story and its predecessor gives a kind of strange feeling to me. Like you've taken the characters out of proportion but haven't.
Aside from the several grammatical errors, the speech errors, and the general off feeling that the stories give, you have an idea of sorts. But there are a few things...
1. You never really explained what the Silver Tiger Claws do, and how they would fit and if they have a real connection to the Golden Tiger Claws. I don't think Dashi would make a twin without good reason, if they are similar, there must be a connection.
2. You've misspelled Guan several times in your last story.
3. Why do you think that if Chase degrades into a Beastly state, that it would be connected with Mania? Now I understand that the characters are probably just finding a comparison, but it urks me that turning animal is being compared to an extreme chemical imbalance.
| Nicole chapter 18 . 4/27/2013
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEASE CONTINUE
| KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 18 . 3/15/2013
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/17/2013
Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?