Reviews for Potiphar's Wife
Johanna F chapter 1 . 8/28
Continue please
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
More chapters please !
Jaded World chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
it was very good.

are you going to continue?
mimimgr chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
love them both how can you decide between C or E? Can't believe you ended it like that, what's going to happen... will he get cought? will bella be like the real potiphar's wife and call rape? so much left unsaid... Great oneshot. makes me want more. like the forbidden.
karyn78 chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
u should continue this story! it's really good. I want to know wether or not eddie gets in trouble with the Bossman.
KrittleTwilighted chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Carlisle and Edward both? Wish we could all be so lucky. LoL
jasleenkaytina chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
I LOVE this o/s and I really, really, really wish you would continue it! :(
mystify23 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009

good job.

interesting story!

even better smut. 3
Tanyab423 chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Nice lemon and good emotions conveyed in your writting but I dont like that they do not end up together and that it was Carlise that they betrayed.. as long as they could fuck endlessly without getting caught I'd be one happy bitch cause the lemons you write... DAMN! they are good!
B1193 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
omg you should make that into an actual story

loved it completely and would love to see what would happen next )

.xo. briara93
DeeStruction chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
You should seriously continue this story.

I really wanna know what happens next!


lovecarolina chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
oh my goodness, please make this longer...
Maddywoo chapter 1 . 8/23/2009

This was kickass! I'm not gonna lie, this is the first one shot I've ever read and from the beginning, I was worried about how you were gonna fit everything in one chapter but you did and delivered!

Wow, wow! This was so detailed and the details were mouthwatering! I've read quite a bit of Twirotica but this is like no other! Simply delicious. And even though I loathe cliffhangers because i hate waiting on edge like a meth addict not knowing when they'll get their next fix, I really liked this one. But since we all know the ending to the story in the Bible, I'm guessing this has same ending as well (bad, Bella).

Superb Job! And why aren't their enough reviews? Damn that! I'm so passing this shit around!
I-live-today chapter 1 . 8/5/2009

u have to keep writing this is too good

i almost fell off my fucking seat

plzz keep writing
JollyFray chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
I don't know wether it was intentional or not, or if you even knew about it as you wrote it, but I absolutely LOVE the reference to Two Weeks Notice!

I totes got an image of Sandra Bullock when Edward was thinking about getting blacklisted from Blimpies! LMAO!

Kudos for you, it was a great story! Any chance you could do at least one more chapter? Just so we could see what happens with the whole wallet scenario? Teehee, it could be rather... intriguing.
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