Reviews for Potiphar's Wife
sshhs10 chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
SO GOOD, Please continue this! I want to see Eddie back the estate with Bella!
e-Ln chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Hot Dam'n. Nuff said. It was lovely and made me want more. Bella's such a cougar.

Peace out,

e-Ln
overzealousbunny chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
loved it! HOt as freaking hell... fans and alone time needed lol

Carlisle and the desk

then the SAUNA

*faint*
JoVersify chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
No flames from me baby!

This was intoxicatingly, desperately scorching hot!

I will bow down and worship you if you continue this story!

GAH! *runs off to find husband*

XOXO

JO
Daughter of the Soho Riot chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Holy hale, this was HOT. Seductress Bella is total win, she isn't seen very often, so I enjoyed seeing her this way. Do you have any plans to continue this?
sandy123 chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
I really liked this story and the fact it had a bible reference was cool

i was wondering if this was the end cuz it doesnt seem like it but then again it says completed at the top so please answer my ?
geekgirlhope chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
So good. I will never look at a sauna the same way again.

I love the sin of it. The forbiddenness of it. Loved getting both pov's.

Are you going to continue this? And I am using this story as my pick of the week over on the Perv Pack Smut Shack. So look for my blurb tomorrow.

Thanks for writing this awesomely delicious treat!
creampuffsteph chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
um, carlisle and bella is hot. lol esp when everyone can see them . you sure started this off witha bang (pun intended). and how insane is it that edward saw the WHOLE THING. dayamn!

can i just say that i love that his eyes look like granny smith apples? and even more because she makes pies bc of it. nomnomnom

also that edward calls her mrs cullen throught the majority of the story. and that she came on to him in the bathroom bahahahahahahaha. i mean i can undertand, how do you resist edwrd fuckin masen?

lol mrs cullen was so in edward's spank bank. that's fuckin awesome. and her gettng out of the pool all wet. lol poor eddie was in trouble.

what can i say, the sexin was hot. i love when edward calls bella baby, bc in most fics they try and keep it close to the books, andstick with love. baby ishot. for reals

and then "this is going to be only me" ohmahgah hahahah he's a cocky sob and i love it.

and omfg you have to continue it

she has his motherfuckignwallet! if you don't continue it i will cutyou. is she holding it for collateral damage? to get him to fuck her again? or to tell carlisle and they can have a brawl reminiscent to nina's BSD? bahahaha

good job my friend.
PurdueLiz chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Damn that was good. Bella is ruthless in pursuing what she wants. And by having his wallet, she holds all the cards. I do hope you'll continue this!
im-betting-on-alice493 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
oh my goodness girly!

by far one of the hottest, sexiest,best pieces of writing i've ever encountered. that was great. you really should contiue. i'm christian and it wasn't offensive to me at all. promise. lol

please please please for the love of all that is holy continue this story!
ninapolitan chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
YOU NEED TO CONTINUE THIS! Holy crap that was fantastic. I'm giving it to Hope to read, she loves non-canon. Fucking excellent honey
Tisaveeone chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Ok I haven't even read the story yet, but I love the concept!
cshorte chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Very interesting.
pippapear chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Oo-ooh! Steamy!

Me likey. . .

Bella plays hardball doesn't she?

Great little story C. I like it lots.

:D

Thanks for this. . .

Poor Edward. He might as well be wearing his balls on his ears.. They are going to be ripped from him shortly I imagine. . .

Lotsa love.

Emmy.

X
Jennmc75 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Very interesting. Please tell me this was not a one shot. I have to know what happens next.

Great job!
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