Reviews for When The Stars Go Blue
Regina chapter 1 . 4/10
Okay I have a few things to say. First of all, I have already read this story once, and I loved it. Also, I love Iris and all, but you make her seem way too perfect. Like she's this amazingly beautiful girl who has a bunch of boys all over her, and she's quite the Mary Sue. Her emo phase was a bit rushed and unrealistic, like she went from being a happy, normal girl to a girl who cuts herself and does drugs. Okay the cutting was normal, but drugs and alcohol? That's a bit much. And Alison. That was my only problem with the story the first time I read it. I hate how you conpletely butchered her character. From the start she was sweet and had an innocent crush on Remus. Then suddenly this guy comes out of nowhere and happens to be Iris' brother, Alison's foster roommate or whatever, and the love of her life? That's too unrealistic, especially because it was never mentioned that Alison was adopted before. So first she loves Remus, then Will comes along, now she's obsessed with Sirius and murdering people over him?! Whatever happened to Remus and Will?! Okay that aside, your grammar in the first chapter (which I never noticed before) is not great. At all. There were quite a lot of spelling errors, and I think a few dialogue mistakes, but there was also the fact that you switched from first person to third person! First it was Lily's POV and it said stuff like "I said" or "I smiled", then it would randomly change to "she looked at Lily" (not in those exact words, just as an example) or "Lily laughed". That's a big mistake, and it really should be changed. I love this story, and the idea behind it, but it needs a few fixes.
leak.my.ass chapter 103 . 12/7/2014
I actually cried. Thank you for such a beautiful story. *claps* this was by far my favorite chapter. J/L is my OTP 3
Iamademigod chapter 84 . 11/2/2014
Oh my god! The end of that chapter actually made me cry! I love that song (and all the other songs you mention, you have GREAT taste in music!). This is the third time im reading your fanfiction. I just love your writing! You're an inspiration to me!
So yeah, thanks!
- Iamademigod
Iamademigod chapter 105 . 9/8/2014
I loved that book so much. I'm not suprised about your nominations! Congrats! I really related to it I adore all the songs you mentioned! I forgot how much I love the song Iris, so thanksfor reminding me! Iris Hewson was such a good character and she was so perfect for Sirius!
I also really liked the way you chatted at the end of each chapter, it makes me feel like I know you, which is weird as your living half way across the world from me!
So yeah, I just though you deserved to know how much I LOVED that!
- Hattie
Iamademigod chapter 5 . 9/6/2014
My favourite band is Green Day
Guest chapter 89 . 2/20/2014
Um, I'm pretty sure that Dumbledore would keep the mission a secret and not the paper publish a story about it naming specific people on the mission...
Guest chapter 73 . 2/20/2014
Ugh... Iris and Sirius are pissing me off...
Guest chapter 65 . 2/20/2014
Wait, they all knew that Remus is a werewolf, so why on earth would they go outside on a FULL MOON? And how could Allison forget her WAND?! Her bloody wand!
Guest chapter 58 . 2/20/2014
You're kidding right? Pregnancy? Seriously? Cliche much? Gosh... Original plot please!
Guest chapter 41 . 2/20/2014
Seriously? Madam Rosmerta just happened to hear these guys talking about kidnappings and killing the Minister's son? Those plans should be secret and wouldn't be discussed in a public place, especially loud enough for someone to hear...
Guest chapter 38 . 2/20/2014
God, Alison is a horrible friend...
Guest chapter 36 . 2/20/2014
Another misunderstnading!? Why was Lily swimming anyway? Please elaborate!
Guest chapter 33 . 2/20/2014
You must be kidding. Amnesia? Cliche much? Ugh... The punch was awesome though!
Guest chapter 31 . 2/20/2014
Lily made James think that she was crying? No Lily-like at all... It makes her sound kind of bitchy.
Guest chapter 30 . 2/20/2014
"We Hewsons know the right thing to do."

Um, WHAT? She was doing drunks and drinking! I don't think she knows the right thing to do...
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