Reviews for A Winters Tale
Otte chapter 3 . 5/24/2009
Haha, man, this fic is so much fun. I love the system you've made for the Escargot Express guys, and the light and cheerful feel to the whole thing that makes it reminiscent of the game. The classes Tony attends are hilarious, and you've got such fun little details in this. At first I was sketchy about the writing, but with each chapter you've gotten more stable and generally got a more comprehensive and nice style of writing, keeping a light, simplistic tone that's still enjoyable to read.

My one complaint, though, would be that Tony's character doesn't seem all that fleshed out. I mean we're only three chapters in, but he seems rather passive, though as the daughter of one, I find it stupidly funny how he's so devoted to becoming an accountant. If you could make Tony a more well-rounded character, this would be a bit more engaging. I'll be waiting for more chapters, keep it up :D
Nanimonaimono chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Aw, I like this story! :3 Simple, but neat and pleasant to read. I loved the part about UFO's and Tony not being a hero.