|Reviews for Valentines Day and Manaphy!|
| Pokemon fan chapter 1 . 9/6
Great advance shipping Valentine story I loved it even if ash was a bit out of character i hope u make another advance shipping story similar to this one
| Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/16
Quick someone get me some angle wings and a diaper
| MjrGenMatt chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
Good job, this was pretty good.
One question though...
When did Dawn acquire the hulk strength to pick up Ash and throw him into the ocean?
| EmperorDraco7 chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Great job on the story, I really like it.
| Thatguyoverthere chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Cool Story Bro. Ha loved the wandering hand part
| Skitty16 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
A solid story, and I didn't mind Ash being out of character. It actually made the story more interesting.
| Obscurites chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
I can't find the best word to describe the sweet and fluffiness of this story! :D
| awncioieniojckdlenmnejkcmnjek chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
truly ash is an ass man
| HErOKetChuMz chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
This story is really funny even you make ash out of his normal form but I'll give you 5/5 for this story.
It very funny and I almost fell of the chair when drew come and said something and got confuse and faints... hahahahahahahaha he really funny and keep going!
| Kamen Rider Fan 12 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
| X-Imogen-X chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
this story is amazing really good!
| Iron Reprieve chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Ya know, now that I think about Drew does sorta look like a shrub...
| LuciferIX chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Considering everything you don't really see Manaphy as often as you should in Advanceshipping stories. Although I would have probably liked this to be a chapter fic to go into more detail and extend a few places it wasn't all that bad.
That's really the only thing that I can say against this. It was a good idea for a fic and brings together good aspects that could be touched on with a heart swap between Ash and May.
While longer would have been better this was still a good read, entertaining and funny. Hope to see more from you in the future, keep 'em coming!
| zeaeevee chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
haha! this was really cute AND really funny!
i loved it!
an awesome V-day story.
keep it up.