I want to comend you on this chapter. It brought me to tears due to how close to home some of this chapter is. Your description of a premature baby, the ordeal and the importance of certain issues that can occur really brought back memories. Well done this chapter made me cry but not sad tears just remembrance tears.

I am really enjoying this story & am a sucker for when Eric & Sookie actually get the happy ending they deserve! CH really missed out on a chance to write even more & have many pleased fans in one shot. Oh well , us fans are very lucky to have Fanfiction & other sites with wonderful writers such as yourself! Thank You Very much!

Great story, never gets old!

I know this is years after publishing, and I really do love this series, but I just wanted to say that the storyline about Quan-Ji and the Chinese vampire is somewhat troubling - there are a lot of really negative generalizations made about Chinese society and people, and while some of it is historically accurate, a lot of it isn’t, and I’m disappointed that this is the only representation in the series - versus all the really positive things we see about Eric’s Viking society and “his people”’s treatment of women and children, and even the other (European) vampires. Your writing is really great, and I wish this part of the story didn’t give such a simplistic view of Chinese history and culture.

Sometimes I just want to slap some sense into Sookie!

Oh once again Beautiful finally poor eric catches a break I love that Sookie doesn't belittle his beliefs also.. the Umbriella in the ass comment had me rolling

What did Eric do on Jol night? What caused him to almost loose control? How did my lady save Eric from being broken( if he killed Sookie, it would have broken him)? Dose Sookie talk to her brother Jason? Did she forgive him for making her break Calvin's arm? Why did Sookie break his arm for?

This sounds like it's building up to one of those drawn out angst-ridden artificial insemination stories.

i love this story, the whole series, it was my first ever fanfic and it is one i will continue to read. thank you for writing and sharing. now off to buy your book. KY

That was simply beautiful. Speaking of souls. It fed mine.

Thank you for your skill with words-your artistry.

i have read this story before it is just wonderful thank you for sharing this with us although i would love to find out what felipe did to make eric take him out

this is the best ericksookie fanfiction that I ever read. And I read a lot of it

Great story

I loved this story

WOW! WOW! WOW! I don't know what else to write. I'm sorry for not reviewing the other chapters, but I basically powered through all twenty in one sitting, I was so enthralled. Your struggles to write this story is worth it's weight in gold. I appreciate you not abandoning your adoring fans and gifting us with this tale.