Reviews for The Rise of a New Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() rewrite seems to be going well, wen can we expect more? |
![]() ![]() Awesome start, hope to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() loving this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope to see an update soon, I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope another update of this rewrite comes soon! Its great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() As with all your stories, I love it. Great rewrite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way you have written Hermione and Charlie and their interactions... I LOVE it. I feel its very natural and believable and so much less awkward then Charlie with Bella because both of them are so similar and awkward around one another, haha. I think Hermione may bring a more calming feeling to Charlie because he doesn't feel the pressure to be the perfect dad who only gets to see his daughter once or twice a year |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the idea of this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see the first interaction with Hermione and Edward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think having Bella come for a visit or come to live with them after the Christmas holidays would make it interesting... as long as it doesn't turn into some annoying love triangle that is lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this first chapter! I never read the first version of this story, so I can't go off of it this version is really different or not then the original before the rewrite, but what I've read in this first chapter, I am excited to read what is to come! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the rewrite! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is different even so this crossover is one if my favorite like the one with Jasper and Hermione I forgot the name again but still I love it. So I'm looking forward to future updates |
![]() ![]() ![]() ya estoy emocionada por el otro capĂtulo |