|Reviews for Take Me Back|
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/27/2013
This is to stinking cute love it. You are knowledgable and have great story telling skills. Love your portrayal of Hwoarang. What made you desire to introduce a " a devil within"? Will there be release or peace? God/Jesus and the Devil, Angels and Demons, Heaven and Hell? Well it be destroyed?... Will they meet Jin?
| KJ.HW.CC chapter 35 . 1/19/2013
Finally leaving a review! I just got the time to sit and read through everything today.
I'll be honest with you in that OC with Devil Gene doesn't hold appeal to me, but Razer is wonderfully balanced and you can see her progression as a character. I really adore SH seriously, I look forward to reading more of him later on. Your take on Hwoarang was interesting, it wasn't exactly how I would picture him but it worked well here. They blossomed wonderfully and I could get a sense of passing time as I read.
Devil held particular interest for me, especially near the end (likes Hwo too eh?) consorting with Razer that way was surprising, though maybe I just have to read on to find out why. I'm looking forward to seeing Jin's entrance and everything in future (though honestly it may take me a while as I have not been up to scratch in regards to fanfiction reading lately)
One tiny issue I noticed was in Selfish Love, when Hwoarang explains to Razer about the people who visit, here:
"...because they realised I love you"
But later it's clear Hwo has not said 'I love you' and still can't say it to her. Whether this was intentional or an accident I'm not sure, just mentioning it :)
Anyway, it's got my interest and I'll definitely be checking out the next story in the series, though it might take me a while!
| Pinkbuffer chapter 35 . 10/2/2010
I can't believe this is the end of this fiction.
Great to have Shin and Changmin back, whatever happen to them did they ever speak to Hwoarang and Razer after their meeting? Hopefully you mentioned them in "Whisper to Me" (ha ha I know you posted it lol can't to read it.)
Great ending. Happy ending. Ya ya ya ya ya!
Aw thanks for the thank you note: -D :-D I'm back too.
| Pinkbuffer chapter 34 . 10/2/2010
"My new nickname for you."
SH lmao lmao
Ya ya Hwo got his first motorbike- awesome.
I miss Baek in the story. Last quote was heart warming.
OMG next chapter is the last.
| Pinkbuffer chapter 33 . 10/2/2010
This was a short chapter but filled with Razer and Hwoarang love. Flower Knight than last name would be garden hmmm that's mean lol but laughable ha. Come on flower boy at least say thank you lol.
| Pinkbuffer chapter 32 . 10/2/2010
I love Baek's speech, has strong meaning. This chapter was filled with action from beginning to End. Fantastic.
| mariannesolvold chapter 35 . 9/30/2010
Oh, so this whole story is totally amazing! I love how you made each of the characters seem so real and that they all had different personalities. I also love how you write. Your descriptions are amazing. It makes everything seem so real. And it's kinda freaking me out.. Anyways.. This story is heartwarming, heartbreaking and breathtaking at the same time! Everything a person could possibly ask for. Humor, drama, love and, of course, the fighting! :D
To sum up this review: I WORSHIP YOU! :O xD
Oh, and pleasepleasePLEASE do write a tekken 6 'you' fic! And prehaps then you could put some -a lot- of Swedish hotness in it? ;O -makes puppy eyes-
Looking forward to read more! ;)
| Pinkbuffer chapter 31 . 9/24/2010
Adorable sweet little SH! "He was not a fighter- he was the Mother" This quote reminds me of Jaejoong. JJ being the mother of DBSK. Aw he got punch by Hwoarang :-(. Hey be nice red-head! Lol lol "Be ready for some slapping tomorrow." "Great." lol lol lol
| Pinkbuffer chapter 30 . 9/24/2010
More members joining to the trio nice. I liked the introduction of the new members. SH a cook? No way! I want some receipts lol. Awesome kick ass fighting scenes too.
| Danko Kaji chapter 35 . 9/16/2010
OMG! I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS! I NEGLECT THE INTERNET FOR A FEW WEEKS, AND THIS IS WHAT HAPPENED! YOU FINISHED "TAKE ME BACK" AND "COMPASS" WHILE I WASN'T LOOKING! _
Howdy. :3 Have I mentioned how much I love you? :3 And congratulations for ending a fic you can't stand. ;P Good for you.
Shin and Changmin, long time no see! :D Almost forgot about them, but it's refreshing to see a third party view on an action-packed awesome story. :3
"And wherever they were, they knew that Baek Doo San was smiling down on them with sincere pride. They missed him too, but unlike their two friends, they knew that he would never come back." - ;_; Baek. Baek! Baek! BAEK! T_T I know you're alive, but still... *sniff* I cried a whole lot today, watching "Clannad: After Story", so pardon me for being exceptionally emotional. :p
"Someone else in another conversation spoke, a female this time, "And I totally bled like, everywhere –" Her period? XD Must have been a hassle, nearly dying of blood loss.
"Hwoarang would so manipulate that situation further. What do you think he would do?" - Imagine him screwing her senseless? XD
"Rolling his eyes, Shin followed the girl's line of sight. It landed on a boy and a girl across the road, sitting on a large, black motorbike." - Razer and Hwo, awesome as ever. :3
"No. Fucking. Way." - Damn straight. :3
Aww... Good ol' Hwo/Raze flirting. God, I miss it. X3 X3 X3
Oblivious. He means oblivious. He means dancing around one another holding out your heart, but there is ink in both his eyes and yours, and neither of you can see what is being offered. He means being forced to look at one another, wanting, but never reaching out and... taking," - Aaaand of course, Devil Razer ruining the mood. But! :D Is setting the stage for what's to come. Drama, love triangles, demons, and martial arts at its finest.
"Here's dinner!" Seong-Hada smiled, placing nine small, oval bowls on the countertop. - SH, will you marry me? XD Wait, he's taken. Never mind. Being my brother is enough, for I can manipulate him to cook all my favorites food on my beck and call. :p
"Thank you," he remarked with slightly narrowed eyes, "Next time I'll make sure it's horrid for you." - Is SH using sarcasm? LOL Never thought I'd see the day. Can't believe Roh-Hwang would blow cash off for some action. Geez, he has to pay to get a woman to sleep with him.
"As the blows were exchanged, more people slowly came, the most recent being a young male and an even younger, shorter, smaller female." - Who's that poke'mon? LOL
"What doesn't kill us can only make us stronger, right?" and "How we survive is what makes us who we are." - What an epic way to end an entire story. Love it. :3 Excellent job. I only regret not being here earlier to show my love.
"Danko Kaji (BAEK! BAEK! XDXDXD)" - BAEK! BAEK! BAEK! BAAAAAEEEEEEK! ROFL You. Are. Awesome. I don't deserve you. XD
Now on to more chapters to review...
| Pinkbuffer chapter 29 . 9/10/2010
Wow this chapter was filled with a lot goodness. Where to start? Lol. The whole conversation note plane was cute between SW and BT :-D I love Razer's come backs when Hwoarang becomes a pervert. 'Hwoarang get dress', she lefted. Lol lol lol. I like the name Nas-San sounds so unqiue. Poor SH :-( Hwoarang's so hard on him :-(
| Pinkbuffer chapter 28 . 9/10/2010
Aw poor Hwoarang just when things starting to go right, a bad memory comes along . Ya ya! Finally they find a new place to stay lol.
| Pinkbuffer chapter 27 . 9/8/2010
Adorable SH trying to learn English as much as possible. Hwoarang being a pervert lol lol that was funny though to the korean translation 'Tell her I like her eyes' to the English translation 'He likes your tits' Bad translater Hwoarang. Lol lol
| AmberAnodyne chapter 35 . 8/16/2010
(Happy belated birthday, TeaC0sy!)
The return of Shin and Changmin! Gotta love those two goofballs and their hat obsession. They definitely have a dynamic that stands out.
"... they knew that he would never come back."- *snickersnicker*
"He used to be somewhat of a bully but, it was really him just keeping others away because he didn't want them to get close or something."- In my experience, kids don't really have that much insight into each other unless they're friends.
"Thank you," he remarked with slightly narrowed eyes, "Next time I'll make sure it's horrid for you."- XD Oh SH. I can't see him really being mean even if he put his all into it.
I love that song. 3
I'd have to say it's been a cookie ride, since it's an option. And you know I love cookies. _ Honestly though, it's been a FABULOUS ride! I know you struggled with frustration sometimes, but you made it through and a wonderful story arc resulted. Congratulations on finishing! :)
Thank you for the not-shameless plug/advertisement. I'll be here for you to bitch/rejoice about any story and anything you want dahling! ;D And I'll work on findin' that jet. XD
P.S.- im in ur window, flashin' mah boxes
| Frulein Leni chapter 35 . 8/16/2010
Die Geschichte ist vorbei :(
Ich gratuliere dir!