Reviews for The Immortal Hero
Hierran chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
Eh did you just kill a main character? Well anyway this story is really good.
Violet chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
I liked the new chapter and I can't wait until the next one. Please continue updating.
Yana5 chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
i think that was me that said noo last time.. darn it i wanted to do it again
MarieVerdonck chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
Nice chapter! Of course the death of Shadow was like: 'No!' But I wasn't aloud to do that :P I have no clue as to what Haldir or Vanya want to tell him but I'm going with the news that Vanya is pregnant :)

I'll miss Aragorn's presence... :) I look forward to more Harry/Legolas bonding, it's cute... Anyway please update soon!

Skullera chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
Hiya... another good chapter... a shame shadow had to die... but i think i kind of understand why you did it. Hope to see another cha[ter in next few days... Also particularly enjoyed gimli in this chapter as we see a bit more of his sensitive side...

I think vanya wants to tell tegalad that both her and haldir wish to adopt him when he returns...
Lientjuhh chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
o my.. You made me cry.. Well done.. :) I liked it.. :)
GeminiCancer chapter 8 . 4/13/2009
She's pregnant. I don't have any advice for future chapters. I usually just review and say whether or not I liked it. It's my experience that people don't like it when you dictate what they can and cannot say in a review. just be glad they were moved enough by your characters to let you know their reaction.
william12 chapter 8 . 4/12/2009
no i hoped that this time shadow lived

but a very good cappy this story is just as good as the lost elfling
fooosel chapter 8 . 4/12/2009
Shadows death was expected, because I read TLE before...

But it was so much more sadder this time...

Update soon :)
Genny Di chapter 8 . 4/12/2009
Is there any way you can work another familiar into the plot? As much as I love Hedwig she isn't the kind of familiar that can help in a war, and since Tegalad is so young I think it would be helpful to have some backup in the battles. I realize that he is very powerful and likly dosn't need help to kick ass, but it would be nice for him to have someone else he can rely on. Though I do think that Shadow, may he rest in peace, was one of a kind and it may be dificult for Tegalad to create a bond with another animal because he had such a close bond with Shadow.

Okay, enough of my ramblings . Even with Shadow's death I think that the chapter was writen beautifully.
CatWriter chapter 8 . 4/12/2009
You got me misty eyed with the leaving of Shadow. I liked that wolf. Hey can Harry have a panther now, I've always been a cat person. Still, their is no replacing Shadow, maybe the panther could be related to the shadow element? Well worth a shot, harry would have a familiar native to middle earth. Good story, update soon. I really like it.

Miranda Gryffindor chapter 8 . 4/12/2009
Is Vanya pregnant? I hope that Tegalad will be okay. I can not wait for the next chapter.
sleepingbriarrose12 chapter 8 . 4/12/2009
A wonderful chapter. I was sorry to see Shadow die, but it was probably needed so Tegalad would bond with the other people around him. I look forward to your next chapter.
I-Y-T-Y chapter 8 . 4/12/2009
As much as I want to cry NO! someone had to die. it was just too perfect, and it wouldn't be LOTR if someone didn't die. *sniffles* I will still miss shadow!
fukinperfect chapter 8 . 4/12/2009
Damn it had me crying again. Atleast we have a legolas carrying tegalad. bittersweet momet. Continue soon please
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