|Reviews for Breakfast at Tiffany's|
| sherbertlemon111 chapter 3 . 2/20/2009
So glad you guys decided to expand on this story, it's been a complete treat reading it so far. Can't wait for the newness of the next chapter. I hope we get to see some Alice-Bella time, they are so fun together. Will Jasper be in this too?
One more question, is Carlisle alive? In the first chapter, it seemed like he passed away but in this chapter Edward mentioned him not talking to him.
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| Raven-Rach chapter 3 . 2/20/2009
| Lucette212 chapter 3 . 2/20/2009
He's alive ... HE'S ALIVE! Thank God for that! (Unless he is ignoring Edward and refusing to speak to him from the grave).
Okay, new questions:
What is the deal with the Jess blackmail? How does she owe the whole Cullen family?
What were the circumstancs for Edward leaving LA?
What help is Bella asking Alice for?
Now all that's out of the way, I loved Edward (of all people) saying this "I value the little ones, the daily ones, the ongoing ones.". Siilar to Bella in WYTYK, it really is about the lifetime fo small gestures - I'm glad BATbella won't have to teach him that here.
I loved that you put "searched fan fiction sites" in with watching chick flicks - reading your stories is such an all consuming guilt pleasure for me!
I loved Edward trying to discretely whiff up some Bellascent on the newspaper - the man is getting desperate.
Loved it all H&T - very excited about the new stuff in chapter 4 but you are doing a great job on expanding the one-shot here; it definitely seems more pleasantly familiar than repetitive.
p.s. Please make this happen eventualy: "I could see hidden smiles across the room at a dinner party."
(duplicate review left on HM4's story link)
| Edward's-a-beefcake chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
Love it love it love it! I am so glad you are doing the full story on this! Cant wait for more!
| moltobelle chapter 2 . 2/18/2009
aw this si so god:)
lol ive never had a poptart.. england is so gay. are they anything like jam tarts? i htink il add eating a pop tart on my list of things to do before idie:)
| hdink chapter 2 . 2/18/2009
I was very excited to hear from you guys that you were continuing this wonderful story! I can't wait to see where you take it. Yay for One Shots that are so good they just have to be continued!
| devadasi7 chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
hooray! batward returns!
i can't believe she freaking kissed him...that was epic!
| katydid2363 chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
Love the analogy of love with strawberry pop tarts. Bella deciding to take her own fate into her hands and walk into that coffee shop was the best thing that she could ever do for herself.
I would like to know where Alice was in all this because it seems that she was witness to the kiss from the content of her text message to Bella.
Now like Lucette21, the answers to her questions about the sadness in Edward's eyes, his being familiar to Bella and the favor that Jess owes Edward are all going to be anxiously awaited for.
Girls, you've got yourself a winner!
| AnUnbrokenHorse aka RushtonElf chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
It would appear that someone seems to love pop-tarts... are you sure you don't have an addiction?
| SaraBear114 chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
I absolutely love this.
| Lucette212 chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
Ahh - lovely ... and funny. Who knew there was so much more to that kiss, on both sides?
This is just opening up more and more questions for me:
Why does Edward have such sad eyes?
Why does Edward seem familiar to Bella - has she subconsciously been seeing him in her peripheral vision every day?
Why does Jess owe Edward a favour?
I loved that she chose to enter the coffee shop in an attempt to make/chagne her own luck and I loved "Trying to take a bite of one now. Leave me alone!"
(duplicate review over at HM4's story link).
| jenellebelle chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
I am so glad u are doing a full story- i think this is so cute! I need to get me some yellow wellies- for sure. lol
MaYbe then I'll start attracting my Edward. one can dream...
| jingles4thestorm chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
And I'm back. lol
I'm pumped for a more in depth plot!
I'm so glad you guys placed well!
| movieandbookgirl chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I'm glad you both decided to continue this story! I cannot wait for ch. 2 :)