Reviews for A ghost from the past
Haneefa99 chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
reddiamond chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
sure expand your story go into more detail and develop it more, lets see if jenny really backs down from not seeing her daughter, and if nate is really over her, or if he will fall for her again now that she's changed all a happy ending would be preferred that a sad one and a happy ending would included jenny and nate and there daughter together in the end, but you could make her work for what she wants , don't be to cruel and also have c/b there to comfort her since dan is gone . well thats what i think , that would make the story even more interesting and is the right direction to go into. but so far it good but in the upcoming chapters( if you decide to write them) you should go a little more into why jenny was on drugs and how she came off( could be because of her daughter) you know things like that. it a good story but it seems a bite rush in the next couple chapter you could also explain how the past 5 years has been for both nate bringing on their daughter on his own, and also jenny her struggles and how she over came them. but good story
ChuckBass chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
oceanation93 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
It's pretty good apart from some grammatical mistakes-you should work on that. It's really interesting though. Continue please!
melstarx chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Pretty good if you ask me :)
ExclamationDot chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
So This Really Caught My Ateention As I Like Nenny Fics I Deffo ''Think'' You Should Do A Story On From Then Its Like You Left Me Hanging For More. X